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10-18-04, 04:23 PM | #1 | ||||
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Ice Pick vs AutoMATIK™
IP: 23CC 11AC
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-21-04 at 04:23 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. DQ'ed.. asking for votes in the Lounge This Battle Is Now Closed
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10-18-04, 07:44 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 23CC 11AC
AutoMATIK™ has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-18-04 07:44 PM.
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10-18-04, 07:46 PM | #3 | ||||
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IP: 23CC 11AC
You Don’t Want it … So Don’t Battle Unless You Into Getting Yo Skull Cracked
I Grip Pieces,So When Its Inside You And I Squeeze It,You’ll Really Get Soul Clapped I Spit Nice hits Those who Test Me Be On The Ground Beggin For Life’s Wish So Who You Tronna Fight Wit? Now RV Can Witness Ice Pick Get Sliced Quick It’s too easy … Youre a vet ? Then You’re About To Get Your License Revoked You’re Done ,So The Next Time They’ll See IP Is To The Right Of Your Posts Yeh Im a bad dude…My Spits is Dirty , So God Himself Couldn’t Scare Me Clean We All Know You’re A Joke … So Imma Officially Serve Ice Like Dairy Queen You Cant Stand A Chance Wit Me. So Watch My Textuals Grind Ya Spine Yeh This Kid Hates But He Can Recite All My Battles Line for Line And Im Sick Of Battlin All These Teens Pricks … Just Another Martial Mathers Your Record Proves Nothin Faggot … We All Know You’re A Partial Rapper We Know You Were Blessed Wit Whackness, I Rhyme With My presence An Spot Flashes It’s Obvious You’re Fake,The Only Time U Eat Kids Is When Usin Condoms As Shot Glasses Easy Kid…. |
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10-18-04, 07:46 PM | #4 | ||||
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IP: 23CC 11AC
haha.pretty nice lookin font.i didnt mean to do that ... so sorry for that if peeps cant read it.
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10-19-04, 01:50 PM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: 579F F01D
Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-19-04 01:50 PM.
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10-19-04, 02:35 PM | #6 | |||||
GoD LiKe
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IP: 70A9 C9CB
Auto's the type of scrub I recognize in clubs but refuse 2 talk to
I'm a glass door, got you lookin foolish thinkin' you can walk through I'll stomp you, into smitherines, leave you flatter than Asian bitches chest, back, or ya' neck cracked, it doesn't matter, my aim is vicious your brain is witless, all you seem to conjure up is aimless disses I'm comin' at you with everything & the kitchen sink... you came with dishes so 'clean up your act' bitch and practice, before you try more than rhymed text and while you're doin that, I'll be entertainin' ya girl with some light sex she gives me 'mic checks', so I never need to warm up for my advanced sets it's crazy, she pays me... oh yeah, remind her to send me my past due checks but enough about her, Auto, lets get back to you and me it's lunacy, thinkin that in deulin' me, you would be, abusin' me my flow carries through every bar in the verse, yours last for 2 or 3 I'm a true emcee, somethin that you're still wishin that you could be usually, I wouldn't waste my time with rhymes dissin' a useless punk L.I should have thought about this befor i get his biggest bitch knocked up See auto i impregnate weak ass mother fuckers like you with real skill son I fathered your style , im the real definiton ill while you just a wack one Think about what you said you have ill speech patterns when ryming Thats because you swallow loads and take it in the ass while dick ryding Its true webster wants nothing to do with ya crew or new words with no meaning or conception Next time decline ya mission with ya •|20/20|• vision and go another direction so blind cant you see your faulty with imperfections We can squabble, ..I`ll beat you until your in a broken grovel, As for boxing.. You can`t see me in the ring, Like Tolkien`s novel, Your like the rest so just take the beating, ..I`m clownin this mark, Any 'glimer of hope' you`ll have will get 'shot down in the dark', I`m groundin ur heart, I don`t just beat.. I eat my opponents, We can shoot it out too, But i got bullets in the heat of the moment, I speak it and own it, This styles mine.. & it`ll get the best of u, When you lose, It won`t be that big of a deal, ..We expect you to, Heres the thing, When i read ya shit, I wanna leave the page tore, If you can`t afford to lose, ..How the hell are you gonna wage war? I`m battlin a crack-headed E-tard.. Theres no way to confuse it believe me, You Said you like my style and im funny as fuck, and you got respect for me So this killing is nothing to me, like ya avy this aint a game like sonic on genisis dude I guess im predicting the win , like it was automatik , like when you lose and ya crew removes you 2 |
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10-19-04, 04:35 PM | #7 | ||||
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IP: 23CC 11AC
wtf. nigga u told me 12-14 lines. i could of wrote a novel too ...
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10-19-04, 04:48 PM | #8 | |||||
~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP: D135 D6AF
Voted For: AutoMATIK™
Ice u had some decent punches nuthin that stuck out 2 me ya personals werent really there had some multis and metas but once again u lose do 2 soft punches and wack structure u gotta fix those if u plan on winning Auto ya punches were there but they didnt hit that hard some of them were simple and played coulda used a little elevation here it was kinda simple ya structure was on point for most part but still stretched in some spots u get this win due 2 overall better punches Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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10-19-04, 08:32 PM | #9 | |||||
GoD LiKe
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IP: E267 1347
Trooper
plenty of personals, read it again, check his sig and his profyle and shit..... Also it says 6 to unlimited lines........ also i work and there for i dont give a fuck how much shit i drop for my verse..... It was you who wanted to battle me not the other way around.... so, if you want i will edit this down to 12 to 14 lines or what ever...... Your Choice
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10-19-04, 08:50 PM | #10 | ||||
My Dick Stay Wet
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Voted For: AutoMATIK™
i got to vote automatik in diz 1....he had da better flow he had better punches..i felt his more..and his punches were creative and he had nice vocab...ice had okay punches da flow was a lil off his voacb and creativity was kind of basic tho..so my vote goes to auto... return da favor in dis battle http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=155709 please..... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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10-19-04, 09:05 PM | #11 | |||||
GoD LiKe
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IP: E267 1347
And Im Sick Of Battlin All These Teens Pricks … Just Another Martial Mathers
Your Record Proves Nothin Faggot … We All Know You’re A Partial Rapper dude im 24 years old you retard, not a fucking teen You Don’t Want it … So Don’t Battle Unless You Into Getting Yo Skull Cracked I Grip Pieces,So When Its Inside You And I Squeeze It,You’ll Really Get Soul Clapped I Spit Nice hits Those who Test Me Be On The Ground Beggin For Life’s Wish So Who You Tronna Fight Wit? Now RV Can Witness Ice Pick Get Sliced Quick It’s too easy … Youre a vet ? Then You’re About To Get Your License Revoked You’re Done ,So The Next Time They’ll See IP Is To The Right Of Your Posts Yeh Im a bad dude…My Spits is Dirty , So God Himself Couldn’t Scare Me Clean We All Know You’re A Joke … So Imma Officially Serve Ice Like Dairy Queen You Cant Stand A Chance Wit Me. So Watch My Textuals Grind Ya Spine Yeh This Kid Hates But He Can Recite All My Battles Line for Line And Im Sick Of Battlin All These Teens Pricks … Just Another Martial Mathers Your Record Proves Nothin Faggot … We All Know You’re A Partial Rapper We Know You Were Blessed Wit Whackness, I Rhyme With My presence An Spot Flashes It’s Obvious You’re Fake,The Only Time U Eat Kids Is When Usin Condoms As Shot Glasses that sis what your verse should look like i hate when people shrink the font to make it look like its tite and not stretched
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10-19-04, 09:08 PM | #12 | |||||
Bonecrushing Nigga
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This was feedback posted for Ice Pick
IP: 98C0 39B0
holy shit... that so many lines man.................
and trop came with only 16
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10-19-04, 09:22 PM | #13 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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This was feedback posted for Ice Pick
IP: 5043 32F4
yo ice pick you gonna battle me next?, jsut chickin polls
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10-20-04, 04:07 PM | #14 | ||||
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IP: 23CC 11AC
ok.you're right,i forgot to add the 12-14 lines in the rules but you said 12-14 so i went by that ... but you can keep your novel,i dont care.
and it dosent matter if my verse LOOKS stretched . It's not about how it looks,if it sounds stretched then thats when they say "it was stretched" i dont make my font small to make it not look stretched,lmao! this battle will take forever to end if ya'll dont vote right,so lets get to it. good luck Mr.Pick ... |
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10-20-04, 08:56 PM | #15 | ||||||
Umm...Yeah
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This was feedback posted for AutoMATIK™
IP: 5043 32F4
blaooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
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