Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-19-04 at 01:08 PM

Must drop verse in 360 minutes after check in.

:::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..::: has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-19-04 12:40 PM.

Archeologist has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-19-04 12:42 PM.

This bitch callin out ''noobs'' claimin its to help them elevate..
we all know u just like to swing ya lil girl punches at a ''lightweight''..*
u couldnt handle a nigguh who can 'dictate' a way the battle goes..
'playmate' pornos an rapin ya right hand is the only time u ever see 'hoes'..
ask this lil ''brit'', he'll admit he's a virgin...
your the winner emergin? ha! thats like sayin you had sex for the first time when your foreskin was removed by the surgeon!
awww, i just kid, you aint no fuckin jew....
but while we ownin up, just tell the people, your gay arent you? (haha)
fuckin homo with the intellegience of a fish...
cause after about 6 seconds he forgets who the fuck hes gotta diss!**
dumbass think fast...
cause ya suckin up to everybody will prove ''nice guys finish last''..
check the forecast, its a potential lyrical downpour...
an on top of all of that, ''kate'' is the town whore!!..***
naw, i aint that heartless but me n her did have an affair..
long term relationship? when she was on my dick she didnt seem to care!..
like xzibit she wanted me to choke her spank her an pull her hair!...****
but all these personals cant be fair.....
so i'll sit back n chill, an anticipate ya verse...
but ugggh, 6 fuckin hours?! what do ya wanna do kid? rehearse?!?...
why cant u be an average emcee n just rhyme...
o sorry i forgot, ''mums'' callin your ''sweet ass'' for ''teat time''..!*****

explanations.........
* = he was acceptin newbie challangers claimin it was too help them elevate when i called him out about it...

** = fish apparently can only remember things for 6 seconds..

*** = kate is his girlfriend, or at least i think she is by the name he has on msn...

**** = in his msn profile it says hes in a long term relationshoip, xzibit has a song that goes choke me spank me pull my hair...

***** = he said he needed 6 hours to drop his verse, an the last line was ''mum'' an ''tea time'' are all british, an hes british, so yeah...

Kids a battlin machine, obviously time to Kill...
Cuz you can come back with fiya...
................But you shoulda come back with skill...
Dreams of facin me & getin a lesson, his dream was true...
So didn't bother going to class...
.........................cuz he just woke up schooled...
100% HaTeRpRoOf but people do till have beef...
But the way you smoke down the blunt...
............You must be near the end of the leaf..
Council on the upp got a sponsor in Nike...
But your no welcome...
....Cus they're throwin you a rope, to take a hike*...
See this herb get served, in rap your straight worthless...
.D|O|P|E|M|A|N. The self proclaimed King...
..............but of what son, Wack Verses...
Lines gettin stretched so bring punches for the Crammin...
Bobs bouncing to my beat...
............... Just look at the way were Jammin...**

*People are trying to kick him from the Council.. & You hike witha rope..

**He Stretches his lines.. & Bob marley did a song called "Were Jammin"

This bitch callin out ''noobs'' claimin its to help them elevate..
we all know u just like to swing ya lil girl punches at a ''lightweight''..*
WACK

u couldnt handle a nigguh who can 'dictate' a way the battle goes..
'playmate' pornos an rapin ya right hand is the only time u ever see 'hoes'..
Wow, wack as hell

ask this lil ''brit'', he'll admit he's a virgin...
your the winner emergin? ha! thats like sayin you had sex for the first time when your foreskin was removed by the surgeon!
NO

awww, i just kid, you aint no fuckin jew....
but while we ownin up, just tell the people, your gay arent you? (haha)
Wtf, omg that was horrible

fuckin homo with the intellegience of a fish...
cause after about 6 seconds he forgets who the fuck hes gotta diss!**
Where is the punch??

dumbass think fast...
cause ya suckin up to everybody will prove ''nice guys finish last''..
Umm sorry but HELL NO

check the forecast, its a potential lyrical downpour...
an on top of all of that, ''kate'' is the town whore!!..***
Yo ur punches are so weak

naw, i aint that heartless but me n her did have an affair..
long term relationship? when she was on my dick she didnt seem to care!..
So basic, wtf, wheres the vocab, wordplay, and the fuckin punch?

like xzibit she wanted me to choke her spank her an pull her hair!...****
but all these personals cant be fair.....
Wow.. thas all im gonna say, WOW

so i'll sit back n chill, an anticipate ya verse...
but ugggh, 6 fuckin hours?! what do ya wanna do kid? rehearse?!?...
You are so wack

why cant u be an average emcee n just rhyme...
o sorry i forgot, ''mums'' callin your ''sweet ass'' for ''teat time''..!*****
KILL URSELF

Overall- Possibly one of the worst verses ive read in like a year.. Nuthing in this, no punches.. and if there were they were so basic.. Awful verse.. id rip the living daylights outta u, but thats beside the fact.. please up ur game or quit rapping

Kids a battlin machine, obviously time to Kill...
Cuz you can come back with fiya...
................But you shoulda come back with skill...
HELL NO

Dreams of facin me & getin a lesson, his dream was true...
So didn't bother going to class...
.........................cuz he just woke up schooled...
Wtf was this??

100% HaTeRpRoOf but people do till have beef...
But the way you smoke down the blunt...
............You must be near the end of the leaf..
No punch

Council on the upp got a sponsor in Nike...
But your no welcome...
....Cus they're throwin you a rope, to take a hike*...
Hike and Nike dont rhyme by the way u fuckin herb.. u suck, theres nothing in this whole bar worth even fuckin taking a shit on

See this herb get served, in rap your straight worthless...
.D|O|P|E|M|A|N. The self proclaimed King...
..............but of what son, Wack Verses...
If u had this in ur "rhyme book" i wouldnt even wipe my ass with it

Lines gettin stretched so bring punches for the Crammin...
Bobs bouncing to my beat...
............... Just look at the way were Jammin...**
KILL URSELF

Overall- Horrible.. i will stop there

Winner- Arch wins.. since he didnt have as many bars as the other cat that were wack.. this was horrible tho.. my eyes are watering this was so bad, im gonna go throwup, uggghhhh DISGUSTING

__________________
<center></center>

<center>ArchitectualScriptures
Joe Punchline™
TFIFW</center>

<center></center>

lmfao ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
nice one
an u want us to retaliate right?
lmfao, okay big shot...
maybe when ya gow up us grown folk will holla at you about some real life shit, hell maybe even teach you thw wonders of the female vagina!
but thats only if your a good kid

__________________

Come on people dont sleep on this please vote.
Leave a link and i will hit it up i swear on my Rv cash .
Pz.

__________________

uppin yall
dont sleep on this........
honest well explained votes will be returned

__________________

Dopeman



best line:

even though the structure got a lil sloppy towards the end, unless would just be spittin that all fast?
but i especially like the "this 'lil brit' " nice wordplay
or

im english myself but that was some cold shit

worst line:

this whole section


the jew part i get, but it was a lil uneccesary.
the fish part just let your flow down, i get your point and where your going with it but, nah. it didnt really work

Archeologist

best lineS:

wow, that there is some nice play, i was impressed

another strong attack, but on a level from 1 arch to another, when your battling you need to get more on the aggressive, your flow is very good maybe if there were more personals, and it was a lil longer it'd be GREAT

worst line:

[QUOTE] 100% HaTeRpRoOf but people do till have beef...
But the way you smoke down the blunt...
............You must be near the end of the leaf..
QUOTE]

personal:yes
effective:no
who puts leaves in blunts? i thought its sticlty buds in the '04?

My winner: Dopeman
Dopeman, because he came out far more aggressive and landed a lot of critical hits with his personals, not all of his flow was watertight though and there was oppurtunity for arch to win, so D-man betta twerk on that. Arch, you did very well and it or not it was hard to judge, keep @ it because you are good, just need to gear it up.

-Arch Out

__________________

Wordplay: Arch got it here. He had more interesting and insightful stuff. Dopeman was alright, but he could have done better.

Meta's: Meh. Both were alright here, but i think arch got it just because dopeman used the word jew as if it was some kind of bad thing.

Flow: Arch got it here too. His flowed a lot easier. Dopeman's structure was lacking somewhat, and not all of his lines flowed easier.

Multi's: Neither really had that many, although dopeman tried a few at the start of his so he got this one.

Punchlines: Arch got this. Dopeman had some good stuff, but not as good.

Vote: Arch

Come on people dont sleep on this please vote.
Leave a link and i will hit it up i swear on my Rv cash .
Pz.

__________________

you cant keep tellin people your gonna pay them if they vote for you
thats cheatin

but upppin yall

__________________

im not i was saying i swear on all my money i will vote on there link that they leave..

if i dont vote on it they can have all my money fool.
Pz.

__________________