Battle Rules:

10-12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 10-24-04 at 03:39 AM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

zDarknesS has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-24-04 02:42 AM.

B.L.A. has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-24-04 02:44 AM.

I got dis 'Angel' stuck in 'darkness' wonderin is 'heaven-so-great?'...
not for you bitch u in hell, enjoy it before 7:08(7*0*8)...
cuz yo ass gots a meetin wit da big man satan...
Pmed me back accepting sayin ' are you for$aken?'...
A 'newbbasher' battlin just to up ya stats....
fuckin homo i aint cuttin yo ass some slack....
postin wack talent, how you be sayin u 'open mic king'...
ima count down how many times i diss u like Lord of the Ring...
find yo crib,send sum bombs an make a total destruktion...
yo punchlines are lame so they still under construction!...

Explanations:


1: 'Angel' name of his crew
2: 708... his alias
3: Pmed and accepted asking if i was forsaken
4: he battled a newb... to up his stats
5: he said he was open mic king....
6: on Lord of the rings two towers they counted how many people they kill
7: Destruktion is part of the crew name...


good luck witht his shit yo....

Voted For: B.L.A.

good battle guys.

B.L.A - you had a good flow to your verse. i liked how you opened up with a personal. good wordplay with the line about the draft. you had a lot of personals that i was feelin. that closer was clever but not really that hard of a hit. overall-7.5/10

zDarkneeS-you had a good verse. i liked the fact that you attacked not only him, but his crew also. is he really 708? never knew that. your opener was good. the bar that came after that was weak though. the best line u had was your opener. your structure was good and u had a good flow to go with it. overall-5/10

B.L.A wins because he had a lot of personals that were clever and hit hard. zDarknesS u attempted a lot but they just didnt hit like B.L.A's verse did


vote B.L.A

iight fair vote..... nyce verse by the way... i know ur 708... uppin for votes

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Mah Battles

vs B.L.A.

LMAO

what gives you tht assumtion?

you must not b a noob then.....

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i am my cousin knows u from aim... i peep in sumtimes

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Mah Battles

vs B.L.A.

Voted For: B.L.A.

flow-bla
structure-bla
punches-bla
multis-bla
wordplay-neither
vocab-bla
my vote goes to bla for the harder punches and wordplay

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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^un explained? ...............................

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Mah Battles

vs B.L.A.

yes it was...sort of...damn no it wasn't lol

thanks for the vote anyway

and good drop Darkness

surprised me a little...

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lol u got a good verse too.....good job

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Mah Battles

vs B.L.A.

Voted For: B.L.A.

I got dis 'Angel' stuck in 'darkness' wonderin is 'heaven-so-great?'...
not for you bitch u in hell, enjoy it before 7:08(7*0*8)...
^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT AIGHT PERSONAL AND AN PUNCH AN "OK" PUNCH ELEVATE USING HARDER PUNCHES



cuz yo ass gots a meetin wit da big man satan...
Pmed me back accepting sayin ' are you for$aken?'...
A 'newbbasher' battlin just to up ya stats....
fuckin homo i aint cuttin yo ass some slack....
postin wack talent, how you be sayin u 'open mic king'...
ima count down how many times i diss u like Lord of the Ring...
^^^^^^^^^ WHATS IS IMPRESSING ME IS DA PERSONALS AND DA PUNCHS U USING BUT DA PUNCHES AINT HITTIN IT HARD ELEVATE HOMIE



find yo crib,send sum bombs an make a total destruktion...
yo punchlines are lame so they still under construction!...
^^^^^^^^^^ NICE CLOSA GOOD MAYNE


DARKNESS-GOOD VERSE SO FAR NICE PERSONALS AND "OK" PUNCHES BUT WERENT HITTIN IT HARD IT WAS TOO BASIC TO ME ELEVATE USING CREATIVE PUNCHES








you were never hot,you began rap when autumn called...
...so it takes nothing at all...or be false... to make darkness fall...
^^^^^^^^^^^^ YO NICE OPENER GOOD PUNCH HOMIE


...It's time to grow...so extra dose your flintstones...
...you can never be pro...you miss a "draft" like indoors...
^^^^^^^^^ I DONT UNDERSTAND THAT LINE BUT IT WAS AN GOOD FLOW GOOD PUNCH THOUGH



...pm'd me for a battle...though...you use it as a personal???...
...reseach my past post??....now let's see what searching do...
...we are aware of talent in you..NOW THAT WAS DISS HONEST...
...we can check our hardest...but still not Z Darkness!!!..(see darkness)
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ O AIGHT MAYNE U HAD PUNCHES NICE FLOW GOOD PERSONALS PUNCHES WERE CONNECTED AND HITTTIN IT HARD


...I insist yo end this...becuase since its you... I lost interest...
...since you darkness...you fearing the women with lil flip!!!...(sunshine)
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ BLAH GOOD CLOSA NICE PUNCH


B.L.A.-HAD PUNCHES GOOD FLOW GOOD META'Z GOOD WORDPLAY AND GOOD PESONALS AND PUNCHES.......DA PUNCHES WERE CONNECTED HARD HITTING TOO


V-B.L.A HE HAD BETTA PUNCHES AND GOOD FLOW NICE WORDPLAYS,,,,,AND PERSONALS


DARKNESS-U HAD AN "OK" VERSE U HAD PERSONALS WHICH IS GOOD U HAD FLOW DATS COOL,,,,,,,,U HAD PUNCHES BUT WERENT HITTIN IT LIKE BLA WAS IT WAS CONNECTED BUT DA PUNCHES WERE HITTING WEAK SO DATS WHY I VOTED FOR B.L.A

~PEACE~

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