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Due Tomorrow at 12 so...oct 26 at 12

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-28-04 at 11:00 AM

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...Xclusive... has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-24-04 11:48 PM.

This bitch changes his name from wildfire to “In-Vision”…
To see a “picture perfect sight” in his low tiered division…
If you’ve seen his picture then you would know hes a “queer”…
Hes “gay” he asks other guys for lickes up his gigantic ear…
He asked for a battle not knowing what he taught me for “elevation”…
He “raised” my ability to throw a punch now hes hurting in preparation…
I’m putting holes in his verse now you know hes got “weak” punches…
To much to overcome? Drop and “faint” im putting your words in bunches…

In-Vision has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-25-04 09:32 PM.

I start off by cuttin his main arteries, and use a corkscrew to drill..
paint his blood over my screen, just to brush up on my skill..
this is an easy win, you only prevent the KO from dick riders..
I beat you at anything, with no legs i could still kick higher..
what were you thinking, 12-3 and you think you can compete?..
you'd have a better chance by pressin nothin but ctrl.alt.delete..
and leave it at that, cause you know that you can't win..
fly as high as you want, the winners bracket you won't land in..


just a quick key..

Voted For: In-Vision

okay this was an okay battle but it goes to in-vision for harder punches ima break it down

x-This bitch changes his name from wildfire to “In-Vision”…
To see a “picture perfect sight” in his low tiered division…
^^ nice personal flowed good but coulda been better 5/10
If you’ve seen his picture then you would know hes a “queer”…
Hes “gay” he asks other guys for lickes up his gigantic ear…
^^ eh weak punch wasnt feeling it 2/10
He asked for a battle not knowing what he taught me for “elevation”…
He “raised” my ability to throw a punch now hes hurting in preparation…
^^decent punch flow was okay 5/10
I’m putting holes in his verse now you know hes got “weak” punches…
To much to overcome? Drop and “faint” im putting your words in bunches…
^^nice punch kinda played a lil flow was okay coulda been better 6/10

okay you had nice structure good flow and decent punches gave you a 18/40

in- I start off by cuttin his main arteries, and use a corkscrew to drill..
paint his blood over my screen, just to brush up on my skill..
^^nice punch good flow and opener 6/10
this is an easy win, you only prevent the KO from dick riders..
I beat you at anything, with no legs i could still kick higher..
^^ good punch nice multi self glorify gave you loss if some pts tho 5/10
what were you thinking, 12-3 and you think you can compete?..
you'd have a better chance by pressin nothin but ctrl.alt.delete..
^^ okay punch could came a lil harder with it good flow 5/10
and leave it at that, cause you know that you can't win..
fly as high as you want, the winners bracket you won't land in..
^^haah good closer coulda been better but flow was good 6/10
umm you didnt have any personals but punches overcame x's only personal...both had structure and flow..woulda been better to se more vocab and wordplay but this goes to in-vision cuz he came harder....no hate
return the favor honest explained
peace~1

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Voted For: In-Vision

Wildfire:
I start off by cuttin his main arteries, and use a corkscrew to drill..
paint his blood over my screen, just to brush up on my skill..
Ok opener, punch was aight, liked the wordplay too, 3.5/5
this is an easy win, you only prevent the KO from dick riders..
I beat you at anything, with no legs i could still kick higher..
Set up was aight, but the punch didn't have much affect, 2.5/5
what were you thinking, 12-3 and you think you can compete?..
you'd have a better chance by pressin nothin but ctrl.alt.delete..
Word, the punch worked because everybody knows when I get stuck in a battle I just turn my computer off. Lol I'm playin', but good bar here, 3.5/5
and leave it at that, cause you know that you can't win..
fly as high as you want, the winners bracket you won't land in..
Blah, a little wordplay, but the punch wasn't that hard, 2/5

Total: 11.5/20

...Xclusive...:
This bitch changes his name from wildfire to “In-Vision”…
To see a “picture perfect sight” in his low tiered division…
Pretty good opener, nice play off his name, 3.5/5
If you’ve seen his picture then you would know hes a “queer”…
Hes “gay” he asks other guys for lickes up his gigantic ear…
Sub-par attempt at a personal, punch didn't work, 2/5
He asked for a battle not knowing what he taught me for “elevation”…
He “raised” my ability to throw a punch now hes hurting in preparation…
Set up was good, entire bar was good until the last word. "Preparation" threw the whole line off, and now it doesn't make any sense, 2/5
I’m putting holes in his verse now you know hes got “weak” punches…
To much to overcome? Drop and “faint” im putting your words in bunches…
Ok wordplay here, but punch wasn't that hard, 3/5

Total: 10.5/20

Winner: In-Vision for harder punches, athough this one was cose. Return the vote to a link in my sig, honest explained votes only...

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i clearly thought streetrydas vote was stupid but what can i do?...lol uppin

i clearly thought streetrydas vote was stupid but what can i do?...lol uppin

Voted For: In-Vision

well i give this to in-vision cuz he had better wordplay and vocab.....Xclusive u would of won if u spit harder punches and worded shit betta..dawg...

Hes “gay” he asks other guys for lickes up his gigantic ear… that down killed it...wtf...lol...youlll get there dawg you just need a lil bit more work and u'll be dope fo sho......But the vote goes to In vision

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1...if he was capable of coming harder...i would have actually tried instead of keyin the shit....2......UPPIN

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why do you think that my vote was stupid....i explained the bars......how is that stupid??

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Voted For: In-Vision

…Xclusive…
This bitch changes his name from wildfire to “In-Vision”…
To see a “picture perfect sight” in his low tiered division…
^nice opner

If you’ve seen his picture then you would know hes a “queer”…
Hes “gay” he asks other guys for lickes up his gigantic ear…
^decent punch

He asked for a battle not knowing what he taught me for “elevation”…
He “raised” my ability to throw a punch now hes hurting in preparation…
^anotha decent punch

I’m putting holes in his verse now you know hes got “weak” punches…
To much to overcome? Drop and “faint” im putting your words in bunches…
^pretty decent closer here…

In-Vision
I start off by cuttin his main arteries, and use a corkscrew to drill..
paint his blood over my screen, just to brush up on my skill..
^nice opner

this is an easy win, you only prevent the KO from dick riders..
I beat you at anything, with no legs i could still kick higher..
^oo…nice punch

what were you thinking, 12-3 and you think you can compete?..
you'd have a better chance by pressin nothin but ctrl.alt.delete..
^decent

and leave it at that, cause you know that you can't win..
fly as high as you want, the winners bracket you won't land in..
^nice closer

Overall
In-Vision gets my vote here becuz…
He had a slight harder punches than
…Xclusive… & they landed…

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7 Day Theory

^nice...like the way you put it nice and simple uppin...