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Marcus Burnett vs SabbatiCus
IP: 08CF 169D
Battle Rules:
6 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-30-04 at 02:11 PM Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in. This Battle Is Now Closed
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IP: 08CF 169D
Marcus Burnett has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-30-04 01:41 PM.
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IP: 9894 AD38
SabbatiCus has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-30-04 01:43 PM.
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IP: 08CF 169D
Snag the win in this, they call me the dope slayer
The gap of our skill is like those of hockey players!! He's wacker then wack yo, we oughta be taxin him He couldnt drop shit if he put rhymes on laxatives!!* You'll never win a battle, i smash herbs, ur my example This kid so stupid he brags bout stealing free samples!! * Laxative's make you poop |
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.Retro-Bution.
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IP: 9894 AD38
The only time this kid was Diagnosed Ill was when he contracted AID'S
Still Grabbing Dick's, Dig's Men's anus'es Similar ta Spade's* Verbally Abuse and Manipulate This Geek have him feeding Outta Tube Marcus Burnett Sound's like a Faggot Who Play's With Anal Lube The only Time He 'Drop's' Hot Is when it Protrude's Out His Ass** Rap ain't for ya Kid,u coul'dnt even Flow if you were ridin On a Raft. Fuckin Weak as Hell.*Spade's You should get this.lol. **You should get this line=reffering to his shit=hot n' steamy.lol |
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.Retro-Bution.
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IP: 9894 AD38
Good verse But I'm sure that verse is Bitten..I swear i've heard it before...Hmmm..
Anyway Upping for My wack Verse.
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Banned: Permanent
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IP: C56C 93CC
Voted For: SabbatiCus
easy win for sabbaticus Snag the win in this, they call me the dope slayer The gap of our skill is like those of hockey players!! wtf weak as punchlines and weak opener He's wacker then wack yo, we oughta be taxin him He couldnt drop shit if he put rhymes on laxatives!!* okay.. i guess.. but alittle played You'll never win a battle, i smash herbs, ur my example This kid so stupid he brags bout stealing free samples!! wack! closer nuff said about marcus you lost this battle elevate Sab The only time this kid was Diagnosed Ill was when he contracted AID'S Still Grabbing Dick's, Dig's Men's anus'es Similar ta Spade's* decent opener ... okay punchline Verbally Abuse and Manipulate This Geek have him feeding Outta Tube Marcus Burnett Sound's like a Faggot Who Play's With Anal Lube not feelin this The only Time He 'Drop's' Hot Is when it Protrude's Out His Ass** Rap ain't for ya Kid,u coul'dnt even Flow if you were ridin On a Raft. decent punchline overalll weak battle ... but Sabbaticus took this shyt easily pz. |
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Light Weight
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This was feedback posted for Marcus Burnett
IP: F8D4 A856
word to yo mamma. You clowned this nigga, nigga. word to their mommas
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.Retro-Bution.
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IP: 9894 AD38
Upping For This Battle ,
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*~Emericas Finest~*
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IP: 0825 899A
Voted For: Marcus Burnett
Sabbaticus-I wasn't really feelin ur verse, I've heard alot of punchlines like those before so it wasn't too much creativity.. don't know what else to say besides elevate MB-It barely beat his but your punchlines were not too creative either.. But you put humor in there and that always helps but you need to elevate too
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(X) CeEding all Expectations
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IP: 5A50 DAC7
Voted For: Marcus Burnett
HAS MY VOTE .WUZ A BIT HARD BUT U GOT MY VOTE CUZ A THE LAXATIVE LINE AND U HAD GOOD VOCAB...........U HAD FLO AND AWESOME STUCTURE AND SUM VERY GUD PUNCHES. HIT ME UP WIT AN HONEST VOTE 4 THE BATTLES BELOW... PREFERABLY VS PUGNACIOUS HAWK..................THANX
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No Relation To Tina
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IP: A1C0 0CC2
Voted For: SabbatiCus
sabb ripped him both of you should work on the multis.....i didnt really see any from either one of you punchlines: sabb took this one....most of his verse had some pretty decent punches in it.....marcus had a good line=the laxative one flow: marcus prolly had a lil better flow......everything came together pretty well.....sabb yours was pretty good too.....one or two lines may have been a bit streched....not bad from either one though structure: both was decent i voted for sabb cuz i thought he came a lot harder as far as dissing marcus.....marcus had one or two good lines but sabb was more consistant with his.....it is a battle and i have to go with the one with the hardest punches and disses....no hate at all return the favor w/ my battles vs. destiny, king dipset, and heroic verse....honest votes only |
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«αи αятιѕт σf ωσя∂ѕ»
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IP: D0B1 51C3
Voted For: Marcus Burnett
damn, this nigka had pretty nice. verse I think Marcus got it. shit, I'll be back wit explanation, my parents callin' me. pc
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Puttin MD On The Map
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IP: 408D D2A2
Voted For: SabbatiCus
vocab=sab wordplay=sab flow=sab structure=marcus multis=sab punches=sab personals=sab rhyme scheme=sab sabs verse 7/10 marcus' verse 3/10 easily won...nuff said... return the favor battle in my sig peace~1
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.Retro-Bution.
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IP: 382F 24DB
Upping For This Battle...i wan't It Closed.
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