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Closed - Expired / old battle win

hang-man has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-04-04 04:41 PM.

check lets get it craken

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Warning I am the baddest

I let flows pop off the top of my head...like kettle korn/
you the type of nigga that pop off boners...to your favorite porns/
i'm a odd nigga...so fuck gettin even im a just settle the score/
I dont know why you battleing me kid cuase like...vigins your not ready/
im a leave your heart torn to peacies...like papper confetti/
ill inbed you in a coffin like...gardeners plant flowers/
or i might just watch you fall to my knees...like the twin towers/
you a coward and listening to you is rediculus/
and me on the other hand im so sick wit this...you think id have hiv or ciphalus/
there aint no need for you to hang man...the outcome of this battle its gonna be ashame man/
its official man you I think you at the end of your rope/
change your name to assclown...cuase its appaent you a joke/
all this rapping in my blood cant you tell its what i thrive/
your name make you a faggot so if i was you i get my tubes tied/
whoever told you you was gonna beat i could of told you lied/
you better off not even postin your reply/

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Warning I am the baddest

its to easy playin off ya name, lets com-pair-it
to how hard u act but ya dick as big as my pubic-hair-is
ya flow is straight up care-less, dog im gonna win
my punch come double-up, knocking u out like siamie-twis
u to weak in the street, N a hand full of pebbles couldnt make u a HARD-ROCK
the way i bust-off-the-dome, like im pullin till ya skull-cocked
16 line is fine, like O.D.B in hes prime
WHY u speeding to rap, when the only ticket u'll get.. is a fine
i talk that raw shit, u talk that saw shit
u'll have to kill a chick'en N skin it, inorder to have a RAW-FLIP
i spit street life, as if i directed the script
i'll leave u all RED, like rock'in alt-falcons with matching flags down a block of crips
i dont need chips to have a meal, dog my stomch stay full
and u'r the only TEXTCEE, who collect gangsta rap pic to act hood N play-cool
dog my flow dirt, like a un-clean-pool
and da heat that i pack, i'll elvaporate this slob-drwal
its ova im done with my freestyle, lyrical beat-down
and i got more body-BAGS, then a 24 hour C-TOWN BITCH

Voted For: hang-man

meta:

I let flows pop off the top of my head...like kettle korn/
you the type of nigga that pop off boners...to your favorite porns/
ok...

i'm a odd nigga...so fuck gettin even im a just settle the score/
I dont know why you battleing me kid cuase like...vigins your not ready/
dont rhyme....

im a leave your heart torn to peacies...like papper confetti/
ill inbed you in a coffin like...gardeners plant flowers/
ok punch but dont rhyme...

or i might just watch you fall to my knees...like the twin towers/
you a coward and listening to you is rediculus/
WTF??? weak......

and me on the other hand im so sick wit this...you think id have hiv or ciphalus/
there aint no need for you to hang man...the outcome of this battle its gonna be ashame man/
1st line good 2ed weak as fuck and dont rhyme....

its official man you I think you at the end of your rope/
change your name to assclown...cuase its appaent you a joke/
......

all this rapping in my blood cant you tell its what i thrive/
your name make you a faggot so if i was you i get my tubes tied/
what???.......lame

whoever told you you was gonna beat i could of told you lied/
you better off not even postin your reply/

the only bar that really rhyme but sadly it had no punch and it was the ending only........

u need to elevate kid work on ya punches flow was ok but all around u need some elevating... 5.0

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hang-man

its to easy playin off ya name, lets com-pair-it
to how hard u act but ya dick as big as my pubic-hair-is
danm way better start.... decent punch/diss

ya flow is straight up care-less, dog im gonna win
my punch come double-up, knocking u out like siamie-twis
ok decent...

u to weak in the street, N a hand full of pebbles couldnt make u a HARD-ROCK
the way i bust-off-the-dome, like im pullin till ya skull-cocked
i felt what u was trying to say int he 2ed line but re-word it to make it hit harder... decent...

16 line is fine, like O.D.B in hes prime
WHY u speeding to rap, when the only ticket u'll get.. is a fine
haha preety funny.....

i talk that raw shit, u talk that saw shit
u'll have to kill a chick'en N skin it, inorder to have a RAW-FLIP
not 2 bad...

i spit street life, as if i directed the script
i'll leave u all RED, like rock'in alt-falcons with matching flags down a block of crips
streched......

i dont need chips to have a meal, dog my stomch stay full
and u'r the only TEXTCEE, who collect gangsta rap pic to act hood N play-cool
ok....

dog my flow dirt, like a un-clean-pool
and da heat that i pack, i'll elvaporate this slob-drwal
ok...

its ova im done with my freestyle, lyrical beat-down
and i got more body-BAGS, then a 24 hour C-TOWN BITCH
oo nice ending....

all around good drop... a few good punches a few weak lines good flow, creativeness was good and original not bad....

vote: hang-nuts i mean men...

Voted For: the metaphor

open: both (but closer to metaphor)
close: hang (Not that good but better then metas)
personals: None (C'mon)
metas: metaphor (Not just 'cause of his name lol)
punches: metaphor (By a lot!)
multis: hang

win: metaphor

Good battle, but metaphor took this. Hang needs to work on punches..

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Voted For: hang-man

aiight gud shit by both mah fu***** aiight u both kame wit hard punches......... i voted 4 hang amn cuz of his opener
its to easy playin off ya name, lets com-pair-it
to how hard u act but ya dick as big as my pubic-hair-is
ya flow is straight up care-less, dog im gonna win
my punch come double-up, knocking u out like siamie-twis
u to weak in the street, N a hand full of pebbles couldnt make u a HARD-ROCK
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sum nasty shit aiight ,,,,,u had punches and structure but fuked up flow dawg wrk on that shit aiight vote on my battle agaisnt jms bond ,.... returnin the favour

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Voted For: the metaphor

This was an overall good batle but im goin to have to give this one to ..........
I really like the flow to both verses
there was a nice touch to HANG-MAN flow but it still could have been a little better with the wordplay, Nice sructure to both verses, The metaphor had some GREAT line too
i really liked his flow but ur metas werent visible but punchlines were sick
nice battle


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upp'in this battle like whoooo-haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Upp'innnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nn

Voted For: the metaphor

I think that this was a good battle...but meta gets my vote...he had the better creative punches in my opinion..he had a better flow and his punches were more understandable...unlike hang-mans who wrote siaimi-twis...dunno what that iz...and he had a better flow overal to me...Hang had the multis tho...he definitely had multis and some good punches but meta just scraped this one....

my vote=meaphor

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Voted For: hang-man

man I think hang man gets this one becuase

flow hang
structure tie
vocab hang
opener-closer hang
imagry hang
personals hang
multi hang
and overall hang

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