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Old 01-10-05, 08:40 AM   #1
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.I.nsane .G.angsta vs Yvonne

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6 -8 Lines
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No Recycling
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Old 01-10-05, 06:16 PM   #2
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.I.nsane .G.angsta has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-10-05 06:16 PM.
 
Old 01-10-05, 06:24 PM   #3
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Well this battle is type easy so ima grow to love it
That Avatars Shoes pretty big kinda matches ur real Stomach
Im on it like clowin big feet on the petal heres a riddle
On you theres somthing really big and nothing realy " Little "
You love this verse and Yvonne u know u wanna hug me Fam
You're " Lines " More Crooked than a straight Drug Free Man
And You aint poetic and my fists hits like the hard led
It is " Amazin " im so damn hot why do u think this site skin got red


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Old 01-10-05, 06:41 PM   #4
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Yvonne has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-10-05 06:41 PM.
 
Old 01-10-05, 07:04 PM   #5
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your name tells ur mental state and u still hit accept?
put a W to tha G..u too small for a P get the concept?
your punches over played like the ass of a groupie
i'll pee in ya mouth so u can flow..or how u WAN'BE
Knock his head off the track..start jackin for a win!
rewind his tape and still slack..y d 4k u strgglin..
u consumed like a pen without ink..watch me write u outta text
i break u as i blink...fuck them wings u aint Lloyd no vex
grab ur calculator and start multiplyin ur los-ses
cos if i divided u an 8 u strickly cant touch-it
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Yvonne is dope

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Word. I respect christians like you.

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Old 01-10-05, 07:06 PM   #6
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nice nice....


uppin this thing peeps dont sleep!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Yvonne is dope

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Word. I respect christians like you.

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Old 01-10-05, 07:45 PM   #7
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Yvonne:
your name tells ur mental state and u still hit accept?
put a W to tha G..u too small for a P get the concept?
1st line, nice play off his name, 2nd line good wordplay
your punches over played like the ass of a groupie
i'll pee in ya mouth so u can flow..or how u WAN'BE
Punch fell short here, setup was aight but you didn't deliver
Knock his head off the track..start jackin for a win!
rewind his tape and still slack..y d 4k u strgglin..
The bar was good, up until this part^
u consumed like a pen without ink..watch me write u outta text
i break u as i blink...fuck them wings u aint Lloyd no vex
Decent
grab ur calculator and start multiplyin ur los-ses
cos if i divided u an 8 u strickly cant touch-it
Aight closer, but the 2 lines didn't really rhyme

.I.nsane .G.angsta:
Well this battle is type easy so ima grow to love it
That Avatars Shoes pretty big kinda matches ur real Stomach
Weak setup, but nice personal
Im on it like clowin big feet on the petal heres a riddle
On you theres somthing really big and nothing realy " Little "
Repeating your previous punch
You love this verse and Yvonne u know u wanna hug me Fam
You're " Lines " More Crooked than a straight Drug Free Man
Blah, understood it but worded poorly, bringing the bar down
And You aint poetic and my fists hits like the hard led
It is " Amazin " im so damn hot why do u think this site skin got red
Wack closer, self-glory

Winner: Yvonne, for an overall better verse, although neither of you really came that hard this time. But no hate...

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Old 01-10-05, 10:38 PM   #8
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i spit it in 8 minutes can't exspect my best lol i had practice
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Old 01-11-05, 04:55 AM   #9
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ya pice was iight tho...decent for an 8mins drop..


uppin ppes..plz
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Yvonne is dope

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Word. I respect christians like you.

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Old 01-11-05, 07:51 PM   #10
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come onnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn


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Yvonne is dope

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Word. I respect christians like you.

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Old 01-12-05, 07:26 AM   #11
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Voted For: Yvonne

I think that Yvonne got this battle because i feel that Yvonne came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt Yvonne got it they were used effectifely and were on point I.G u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to Yvonne good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to Yvonne and flow and structure i'll give to I.G.

V/Yvonne There's my sig be sure to return the favour honestly
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Old 01-20-05, 08:36 PM   #12
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insand gangsta-Flow was nice, punches was played out too basic and weak. Wordplay's was good, but punches too weak. Not very effective.



Yvonne- Nice verse, punches was good still needs elevating though. Flow was nice. Wordplays was good. You still elevation in punches. Punches in your verse was very effective.




overall=Yvonne hands down cause she actually threw some effective punches, while on the other-hand Insand Gangsta didnt had very good punches, much were played and very not effective, didnt some strong. Vote goes to evyonne, basically harder punches. wun
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Old 01-22-05, 01:04 PM   #13
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Aii This is what I Think

I think That Yvonne did great Although She didnt add all those Colors to her verse like I.G. Did but LOL Still Her verse wa s hot so she didnt need all the Colors and stuff And Also Her Punchez connected with ease While IG I know ive seen you do betta so Im guessing you were rushin when you did this but n e ways im Giving my vote to
Yvonne
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Old 01-25-05, 06:54 AM   #14
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Voted For: Yvonne

YVONNE DOPE LINES LOL MADE ME THINK 4 A WHILE GOOD SHIT...............OVERALL GOOD SHIT...........GOOD PUNCHES GOOD PERSONALS...GOOD.....USE OF VOCAB.....new era good shit wuznt feelin it though aiight....no beef yvonne took this out yo return the favour in the battle belwo me vs diplosive needs sme votes goin.......aiiihgt,,,,,,thnx
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