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Old 01-30-05, 08:31 PM   #1
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Reneg@de vs ~Da_Illest~

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Old 01-30-05, 08:33 PM   #2
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Reneg@de has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-30-05 08:33 PM.
 
Old 01-30-05, 08:37 PM   #3
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~Da_Illest~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-30-05 08:37 PM.
 
Old 01-30-05, 09:05 PM   #4
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ur style of rap is made up like a book of fables//
i'll lyrically kill u like bacc in ancient times i'm caine ur abel//
even if i had no feet i still won't lose a step against u//
cuz my lines would roll ova u more den a woman's hairdo//
there's no choice u can score, like u talkin 2 a nun//
so i guess u must as well add 2 ur lost column by 1
 
Old 01-31-05, 02:25 PM   #5
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check it

Yo I'm the god that'll smite ya crews..
You the muthafucka to pick a fight wit a dike n lose
Reneg@de stay paid...lay in the shade
Been rhymin for a lifetime, ya shits just minute maid
Spit again me I come hard like wild boar
Or a genius battlin an ~ILL~iterate retard
Shotgun shells will turn this yellow belly white
And I beat this superwoman with a kryptonite mic
Or throw slugs like C Batteries and leave you Energiez
Like Walla walla I got this W no need to be surprised
 
Old 01-31-05, 07:47 PM   #6
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uppin for some feedback on this one people, we need to declare a winner
 
Old 01-31-05, 08:33 PM   #7
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good job. Fix ya structure and work on ur punches.
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Old 02-01-05, 02:05 AM   #8
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This was feedback posted for ~Da_Illest~

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Old 02-01-05, 04:06 PM   #9
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yo i think renegade won because his punches are just way better than illest he had better structure and better overall verse it aint really hard to see that his shit was more complex and he had a nice nameplay in there and a couple of multi's and a decent vocab
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Old 02-02-05, 01:05 PM   #10
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uppin again for some more votes on this battle here
 
Old 02-03-05, 10:21 PM   #11
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uppity uppin uppin for some more votes on this battle
 
Old 02-04-05, 12:00 PM   #12
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Voted For: ~Da_Illest~

i have seen alot betta battles but it was ok but both need 2 elevate in ur rhymes:
opener: ill
vocab: renegade
punches: both
personals: both
structure: ill
multis: n/a
ender: ill
diz was a very close battle in my opinion but ill just have a little bit more punches den renegade
 
Old 02-04-05, 04:34 PM   #13
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ight it'z tied up 1-1 uppin 4 more votes c'mon & vote people
 
Old 02-05-05, 06:18 AM   #14
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punches-Reneg@de
persnals-none
flow-~dI~
made sence-Reneg@de
metals-none

immma give my vote to Reneg@de both was weak but Reneg@de came a little harder on the punches ~DI~ had nice flopw on some part but some of his verse mad no sence at all thats y im giving my vote to Reneg@de 4 having harder punches and making sence
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Old 02-05-05, 09:40 AM   #15
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these 2 verses by both of y'all were not 2 it'z potential & need 2 be elevated more in your next battles:

opener: ill
vocab: both
punches: both
personals: both
multis: nobody
structure: ill
closer: ill
like i said b4 this battle was weak in my opinion & i hope u 2 step ur rhyming game up 2 par next time 1
 
 


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