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01-31-05, 06:32 PM | #1 | ||||
Banned: Cheating
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@. vs Parallel
IP: CF38 FCAC
Battle Rules:
12-30 lines Topic: Life of Slavery No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 3 days after checkins Minimum posts to vote: 500 Check in by: 02-03-05 at 06:32 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. Closed - Expired / old battle win This Battle Is Now Closed
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02-01-05, 06:23 PM | #2 | |||||
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IP: 5043 32F4
Parallel has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-01-05 06:23 PM.
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02-02-05, 03:39 AM | #3 | |||||
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IP: 838B 916B
@. has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-02-05 03:39 AM.
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02-03-05, 10:24 PM | #4 | ||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
..Life of Slavery.. Speechless, I couldn’t speak, you were in Control You stood in front of me & it felt like Police Patrol Even tho you didn’t try to put it out the way you Did I was broken in my heart, speechless on any Grid You can say I touched your heart, raised the Soul But no matter what I’ll still regret it, stuck in a Hole Only place to go is Up, down or left, im going Right Despite the choices you made im choosing Right You’re always on me like another annoying Infection Makes me feel like school, back again in Detention I wish I could figure a way out, such a bad Selection From a far distance away, I could see Determination I took a second, realized, most of this was a Dream But most of the time, felt as I was falling off a Beam I didn’t like the way you always tried to be in Control Fear the ways you acted, I lost my heart and Soul Really troubling when I’m not able to show Credibility Not understanding the official strategy, troubled Me I never really could understand you, in any Degree So I wonder off, found a better life, at a cheaper Fee |
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02-03-05, 10:27 PM | #5 | ||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
..Life of Slavery.. Speechless, I couldn’t speak, you were in Control You stood in front of me & it felt like Police Patrol Even tho you didn’t try to put it out the way you Did I was broken in my heart, speechless on any Grid You can say I touched your heart, raised the Soul But no matter what I’ll still regret it, stuck in a Hole Only place to go is Up, down or left, im going Right Despite the choices you made im choosing Right You’re always on me like another annoying Infection Makes me feel like school, back again in Detention I wish I could figure a way out, such a bad Selection From a far distance away, I could see Determination I took a second, realized, most of this was a Dream But most of the time, felt as I was falling off a Beam I didn’t like the way you always tried to be in Control Fear the ways you acted, I lost my heart and Soul Really troubling when I’m not able to show Credibility Not understanding the official strategy, troubled Me I never really could understand you, in any Degree So I wonder off, found a better life, at a cheaper Fee |
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02-04-05, 09:43 PM | #6 | ||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 4257 B15B
Life as a slave http://www.pbs.org/wgbh/aia/part1/images/1iron0147m.jpg Let me start of with my nightly prayer oh,lord. why is this my life? oh lord,why did you pick me to serve the rich oh,lord,why mustnt you relize id rather be dead oh,lord.if I serve them well,would you bless me with freedom Everyday is the same acurance for me I ask for some water,my "owner" ignores me I feel alone in this world,only freind is in my refection Why has god turned his head away,showing me neglection Im not a killer,nor evil,im not a murderer nor a thief I feel like i was once attached to a branch,now im a falling leaf but im never gonna hit the ground,just be lost in the breeze I try my best to do right,but my boss is a disagrees Im forever cleaning, cutting wood but its not about the physical pain cause im strong,but this is causing dents in my brain Im slowing starting to grow hate inside,which I never had before Do you understand what its like to talk,and forever be ignored? If you were comparing jail and this,jail seems like bliss at least there,its not round your neck....but cuffs on your wrist's you have got to understand me,Im not faking this,I really do feel sick I was allways told I was a bright child,why am I treated like im thick? for some reason I feel like Im deep underground Nights go by,with the same signifigant sound so I stop and try to figure this out................... Am I living a life,without living @ all ? Or am I dead,and this is how hell starts to call? |
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02-04-05, 10:39 PM | #7 | ||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
pretty good man, lets get some votes tho we dont want this all 0-0 forever
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02-05-05, 05:06 AM | #8 | ||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 838B 916B
upping for honest votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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02-05-05, 11:20 PM | #9 | ||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: CF38 FCAC
uppin............................................. ................
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02-08-05, 07:04 PM | #10 | ||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: CF38 FCAC
uppin............................................. ..
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02-08-05, 11:03 PM | #11 | ||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 838B 916B
I can not belive this............fuck rv is lazy.......maybe this is why I never battle!
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02-10-05, 10:41 PM | #12 | ||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
^probably is, but fuck this gay shit wanna just close it?
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02-12-05, 08:59 AM | #13 | |||||
New to RV
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IP: 227E 171E
i was feelin the visions post alittle more only because the though was made clearer through words and the structure........
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02-12-05, 01:28 PM | #14 | ||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^whos vision? his name is @
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02-12-05, 10:01 PM | #15 | |||
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IP: 258C A279
Voted For: Parallel
both had good drops...flow was on point, and both stayed on the topic here...to me though Parallel came a little harder in this topic though, just had a better story...but both had good vocab on it, just that parallel had a better story to it... @ your story was good...flow & vocab were good too...but i felt that it wasn't as good as parallels though... no hate to both tho...just sayin what is on my mind
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