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02-07-05, 02:17 AM
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upfront vs Aurora
IP: 853E 9028
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16-20 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Topic: Braindead. Good Luck! Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 02-10-05 at 02:17 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. DQ'ed for only dropping 11 lines when limit was 16-20 This Battle Is Now Closed
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02-07-05, 08:33 PM
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IP: 3E88 8976
upfront has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-07-05 08:33 PM.
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02-07-05, 09:49 PM
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IP: 3E88 8976
yo,
young nigga naive fuckin wit a bullet, thought the heat was on safety so i decided to pull it/ nex thang i seen was an iv i was hooked up in a hospital, had a tube up my arm pumpin monoxinal, food tube wut the fuck hows this possible/ cant rememba who i am and where i reside, tongue hangin out my mouth the doc sayin " another case of attempted suicide"/ try ta think but lose my trail a thought, the last thing i rememba is the sound of the shots/ ring ring there goes a sound, a nurse comes in gets me up its time to walk around, head pointed directly to tha ground, cant hear a thing ears muffled voices make no sound/ slowly my mind starts to reminisce to da past, bright lights turn to a loud blast which turn to a dark contrast/ i see red lights and feel heat roll of my back, a beast wit skin like a snake makes a surprise attack, he starts sayin shit like uve sinned.....as a matter of fact/ on the 4th u hit a nigga fo fuckin wit yo shit, that was a step back and my torch became lit/ u then shot a kid wit that exact gun, why cuz u thought it'd b fun, there were two clips in the barrel u forgot about that las one/ shit came back at yo head fa what u did to that womans son, now ya ass is in hell the tortures begun, if u dont do this shit nymore i wont burn u like a hot cross bun/ i then woke up to the barrel of a gun, it was the boys mom laughin at my retarded ass sayin "now ur lifes done"//// 1st topical lemme kno whas up uppin, thanks
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02-07-05, 10:24 PM
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IP: 7189 3E18
Aurora has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-07-05 10:24 PM.
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02-07-05, 11:11 PM
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IP: 7189 3E18
BrainDead: Dear Diary, please help me pray god, my mouth has starts to get sour today my man was hit by the bus right around 1700 hours feeling desperate, I hit rock bottom, my heart accelerates I can't concentrate, & I'm finding it very hard to respirate found out he has other health problems too: he's overweight got diabetes, cancer, saw him today in a emotional state I'm concerned of his mortality rate, now we've inter-relate he was on motorbike, all police recover is the license plate I just wish I could go back, to that Saturday and recreate that moment so I could save and sacrifice for my best mate . . . . Dear Diary, been 3 weeks since I'm able to fill a entry, sorry for wait, last week I was able to visit my friend, who's in reinstate told him to hang on, and keep stretching that line of fate said our combined weight'll squash the illness piece of cake said da bus driver had tried to sue us for getting in the way but everythings all great, for you I have went & recriminate suddenly a jolt came to him, and I thought it was his fate suddenly he was in a coma, later he couldn't think straight another week later today, after he got operated on his head He's in a mental state, going crazy at me, I sighed and said, "Kid's BrainDead..."
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02-08-05, 12:14 AM
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IP: 7189 3E18
upping for votes now, lets get this battle closed as fast as possible
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02-08-05, 04:37 AM
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IP: 853E 9028
uppin............................................. ....
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02-08-05, 07:33 AM
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IP: 3E88 8976
upppin uppin uppin uppin............................................. .....
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02-08-05, 04:15 PM
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IP: 3E88 8976
uppin ...............................
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02-08-05, 10:17 PM
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IP: 9834 0763
uppin............................................. .
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02-09-05, 06:17 PM
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IP: 2D8F 1019
uppin uppin uppin ............................................
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