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Dolla-Bill has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-11-05 09:41 PM.

iight, lets battle nigga...
im bout to kill dis cat like blood cells to a fag man wit HIV nigga...
he got hemp plants?..well too bad my blunts are bigga...
im D.Bill for a reason.."nailin" u down wit my bigga figures...
im "rollin" dis battle up...
and as long as u still alive..im gon "light" u up til ya "paper made" flows give up...
so in otha words, im pissin on ya like R.Kelly did his girl slave...
forfit, cuz there is now way u can write eight lines in 30min anyway...

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Hammer has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-11-05 10:05 PM.

This bitch was born October the fourth*1
Anniversary of disaster, in america’s north
Trying to clap easy victories and got caught*2
You go to high school, why is it by me you get taught?*3
So proudly say you “had bread before rap�*4
Either you a baker or just a spoilt little brat*5
Your in Detroit, but wat side of 8mile we ask*6
Actually live under the bridge with a bottle and brown bag

-----sorry for explantions---------

*1 = october 4th's his birthday
*2 = bitch slapped thread for newbies
*3 = says his occupation is high school student
*4 = wat it says in sig
*5 = spoilt little rich kid
*6 = lives in detroit

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^^^dat was iight...good luck...*cofz*..................................... .........

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Voted For: Dolla-Bill

im bout to kill dis cat like blood cells to a fag man wit HIV nigga...
he got hemp plants?..well too bad my blunts are bigga...
im D.Bill for a reason.."nailin" u down wit my bigga figures...
im "rollin" dis battle up...

VS

So proudly say you “had bread before rap”*4
Either you a baker or just a spoilt little brat*5

Vote dolla bill with better punches and harder ones too.

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Voted For: Hammer

this was kinda weak yall. but hammer def tok this battle to me personally. Dolla bill didnt really diss the opponent much, n his structure was real f'd up n it was hard to follow in some places.
opener=hammer
closer=hammer
structure=hammer
punches=hammer
multies=none
vocab=tied
so basically hammer takes this battle, work on yall punches to make them more creative n have better word play, nah mean
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Dollas in the Bank= Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
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^^^thanx 4 tha feed so far yall...~1~...u just gotta look at everything bout hammer to get my punchlines...he like weed and his name is hammer...i jus played off of dat...but thanx a/w...4real

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same crew, but i think you got this man it flowed betta than his .

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Voted For: Hammer

you took it simply cuz you had more organized punches . it was a lil lame i'll say though no hate jus elevate ha. but yea hammer i liked how you worked off of where he was from and his personal shiz. d.bill good start i liked what u had u jus needed a better structure and more personals.

ight peace out .. if yall wanna battle me jus call me out in bitch slap
~1~

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Voted For: Hammer

dalla bill no flow struture is horrible shit dont rhyme no punches at all disses were weak shit looks like a long ass sentence of shit talking that you spaced out shit is horrible for real its just wack
hammer you aint have to do much good struture and flow the expanations is wacked and unnneeded as well here so dont do that punches and disses were ok need work but helped you cuz thats what made you better your oppenant

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Voted For: Hammer

This bitch was born October the fourth*1
Anniversary of disaster, in america’s north
not bad
Trying to clap easy victories and got caught*2
You go to high school, why is it by me you get taught?*3
aii
So proudly say you “had bread before rap�*4
Either you a baker or just a spoilt little brat*5
cool
Your in Detroit, but wat side of 8mile we ask*6
Actually live under the bridge with a bottle and brown bag
no
Over all good verse my fav line was that bread one. Some dope punches there


im bout to kill dis cat like blood cells to a fag man wit HIV nigga...
he got hemp plants?..well too bad my blunts are bigga...
Na
im D.Bill for a reason.."nailin" u down wit my bigga figures...
im "rollin" dis battle up...
and as long as u still alive..im gon "light" u up til ya "paper made" flows give up...
Am i trippin or did you just rhyme up with up?
so in otha words, im pissin on ya like R.Kelly did his girl slave...
forfit, cuz there is now way u can write eight lines in 30min anyway...
not feelin

DB wasnt liking your verse no real punches .

return favour plz


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