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Check in by: 02-27-05 at 04:45 PM

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Cincanatus has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-27-05 04:16 PM.

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Buck.Shot has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-27-05 04:23 PM.

Kids another Alias, Hidin behind a name with No Balls
Cause his skill comes around as often as ''Seasons Fall''
He aint the Sharpest Knife in the Draw, As You can Tell
50 cent a ''Pop'' n ya ''Lines'' still wont Sell
Offerd me the Positin in God Squad, My number 1 Fan
1 look at you, an I can tell your mommas More of a Man!
Flows is Deflated as an Airless Baloon
I seen more ''Elevation'' in a Highschool Papers Cartoon!

Explanation:
1st line = He didnt call me out, just set the battle up, an hes obviously another whack Alias

Closer = Highscool cartoons are hardly elevated like the simpsons or somthin, ya know? they just some whack drawings, think about it.............

dont vote if ya dont understand

Peace out

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lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Shit what does Kordozar have ta do with anything at all? i never claimed i beat him at all, hahahaha, da fuck are you using his name for in our battles? they are not even personals, man, you are lame as hell, you have like 6 aliases an made your own crew tih 'em all hahahah, whack ass bitch, estbalishment only wants you in they crew cause you hate on me, there life an your life revolves around me! hahaha, i wish i knew that shit before we battled, i would own you with personals, you play off my record an dopeman, an used kordozar name in the battle? hahahaha, he has nothing at all ta do with the battle..............

an if you get votes for using kordozar, then seriously there is somthin wrong with this site, if u get votes an people disgareee with the kordozar shit, then fair enuff, but why use his name IN OUR BATTLE??
lol, get a life you HO, you an all your aliases lol

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Voted For: Cincanatus

Normal Punches-Cincanatus, some punches were funny, but some weren't. Overall work on keeping ya ish consistant. Buck.Shot,

Personal Punches-Cincanatus, really the making fun of his name was the best personal. Some decent personals. Work on better material. Buck.Shot- no really hard hitting personals. All are already knowng bout him, so don't really hit that hard.

Metaphors- Cincanatus, not the best metaphors, but better then Buck.Shot's. The jello commercial was the best one. Buck.Shot, a lot of your metaphors weren't that good. Highschool comics? How the hell do you think of that? Some comics are good, so overall just work on stronger metaphors.

Multiple Rhymes- Neither

Structure- Cincanatus, just overall looks better. Buck.Shot, your structure has improved amazingly, but it still needs some elevation.

Flow- Tie, flow was fine for both.

Word Play- Tie, neither had really good wordplay.

Cincanatus, your verse was stable, but you need to work on your wordplay. You have basically gotten personals, but your wordplay suffered here. Try some harder personal content as well.

Buck.Shot, your verse was aight, but I don't feel that you put enough work into it. Some of your lines felt like fillers, work on your personal punches and your wordplay.

No Hate Just An Honest Voter

v/Cincanatus

One Vote. One Battle. One Victory


Vote disqualified for suspected d/r.

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I didnt even know who he was, he just set the battle up lol.........

an it turns out he was the person on an ALIAS who i wanted ta battle all along but he ducked on his other alias

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