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phive vs Da UFC
IP: A585 EC1B
Battle Rules:
6 - 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting ight dawg letz rip dis shit ![]() Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 03-13-05 at 11:39 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. DQ'ed - more than 5 active battles open This Battle Is Now Closed
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IP: 64A0 EA20
phive has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-10-05 03:20 PM.
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Lyrically Unchallenged
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IP: 64A0 EA20
ten lines, i spit ten rhymes, commit crimes naw dawg, you
just pick dimes, collectin welfare checks, and pennies from spit shines/ all the true lyrics i spit, with all the mc's i hit/this kid must be a minotaur cuz hes full of bullshit, imma tear and rip, bust ya lip, if i had a gun id probably empty da clip/ my lyrics are hot like burning bodies, i crack niggaz skulls and crank shotties/ imma crack your skull too in ten spots, watch ya brain fall out so i can hear ya thoughts, then rip out ya intestines and practice makin slip knots, dying cuz you got lyrical blood clots, my rap style is mechanical like robots,
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Lyrically Unchallenged
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IP: 64A0 EA20
yo post ya verse man watt the fuck
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Lyrically Unchallenged
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IP: 2AF4 5C39
yo wheres yo verse at playa come on spit it
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IP: 329D CCEE
Da UFC has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-11-05 07:27 PM.
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IP: 329D CCEE
yo ill key ma verse up now playa fo real
i apologize for da wait |
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IP: 329D CCEE
im da bold one u takin it up da colon fag im already past dis bull
ya only da show smasher cause of all da fists dat smash ya skull you da last in full and ya by yaself you only can get a girl by rapin cause da only girl u be able to pull is da one in ya fuckin location you in luck im takin ya raps so homies wont read, u sayin 'fuck sir' when i said 'hurry up essay' i didnt mean use dat as ya structure whats yo chance to win 0 cause homie fo real you just a dick see but dawg i dont need to squad up to still walk away wit da victory leavin ya ripped see cause i be leavin ya like you at night, wetting phive just aint ya name homie, its da number of votes im getting his sig says show smasher his location has da name bethany in it http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=174650 ^^^^^^^^^look at da structure mayne phive lost to dis nigga squad up fo real phive equalz 5 and it takez 5 votez to win uppin fo da votes mayne ill return da favor fo real just leave yo linkz |
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Flyweight
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IP: 5F09 8F0A
Voted For: Da UFC
decent spit from both, heres how i saw it: structure: imma give phive this one, i was just feelin it more punches: neither guy had much wordplay, but i thought the personals in ufcs spit made his punches hit pretty hard, harder than phives at least overall i thought a lot of phives was kinda self-glorifying, and there were no personals or wordplay in the punches, which made the spit kinda weak on a battle tip, but no hate man keep elevatin return the favor links in sig |
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Lyrically Unchallenged
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IP: 995C FBA1
whatever man you dont know rap at all you fuckin retard fuck in hater man
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IP: 329D CCEE
dawg dont hate but fo real i beat yo ass
uppin dis fo mo votes |
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Lyrically Unchallenged
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IP: 995C FBA1
naw man see ya didnt you just full o your self yuou fuckin bitch
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Ka.Nek.ShuN
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IP: 7F23 8EDF
Voted For: phive
need to work on ur structure a bit more... good verses... Vote removed
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Ka.Nek.ShuN
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IP: 7F23 8EDF
yo cancel that that... was ment to be feedback.. sorry my bad....
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New to RV
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IP: 60D9 A2F0
Voted For: phive
vote=phive...but only just feelin this one more than tha last of yours i read. you didn't try cram as many words in and it flowed better. tha endin was a bit wack, but you had some nice lines in tha middle (e.g. tha minotaur line)..and you coulda done with more personals ufc had better personals, but to me yer shit didn't flow as well as phives...if it had you'd have won this..
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