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Check in by: 04-09-05 at 10:25 PM

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hood_dawg has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-06-05 10:28 PM.

SpeatsBeats has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-06-05 10:32 PM.

Battling this kid is like battlin a dead body
............i aint feeling none
Before hanging with him i rather be necrophilie
.......so i could feel some?
If hell learned you to be wack...well im an angel
If jesus would thaught me to rap,id be peaceful
Dawg in your hood they all some god damn pussy's
Use ur head not your "dick" to "spit" something good atleas
I did this while doing 5 other things the at same time
And your still consentrating for an hour on the same line?
No hate Hoodz doggs,oops i spelled ur name wrong
this Young preteen s'gonna diss me with his mom

fuck,lol peace

i'm going too leave you're fuckin' medical bill really expensive
you probably 1 of those bitches that find my lyrics offensive
you too chicken too cluck u urself told me your wack as fuck
my lyrics got u struck and has ya stuck 2 a point that u suck
might as will give up, hittin ya hard till you down on your butt
u a fucking gay little girl that doesn't even have any johnson
this kid accepted ta battle u dont even know whats wisconsin
maybe its cuz im 2 lazy 2 battle cuz im still not givin itall ihave
u makin me laugh and u'll be lucky if u even get my autograph

lol fake personals,damn i hate that,anyway,oh yah...u said no prewritting,i know that is

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Voted For: SpeatsBeats

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=184675
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Ight....Clearly Hood_Dawg won this.Punches were whack on both sides.Try liminting the amount of times you praise urself in a battle.Speats..there was one line that didn't even rhyme.U gotta do better than that.But it seems to me that both of you guys forgot that the purpose of rap battling is to riducule the oppenent.

Vote-Hood_dawg

Voted For: hood_dawg

vote goes to dog because his punches his harder, and his rhymes worked

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Voted For: SpeatsBeats

ok this was a blah battle overall

Straight Aim- i liked your verse but it was just to bland. your vocab wasnt really up to par with speats and your metaphors were shit . to be honest you need alot of work . the only thing you really had up on was the structure . so up your vocab and work on your punches.. play off of his name or something.

speats. your getting better . i can tell you are struggling with how to deliever your punches . only reason i think your going to take this one . is because you did have better vocab and at least a few punches that somewhat slapped .. not punches i guess lol . but yea work on using bigger words and you coulda made so many jokes with his name... "straight aim" haha but yea you took this because you had a better vocab, punches and some semi creative lines.

vote// speats

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thats not a vote get that shit removed.

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Voted For: SpeatsBeats

Straight Aim: Wow. Your verse had nothing. It was baby punches. You need to get metaphores, witty concepts, and some wordplay. Dont just say that he's gay and falls on his butt. Thats horrible. You had no quotables. Your flow was choppy too.

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SpeatsBeats: geeze at least this was an evenly matched battle. Anyways, yours flowed better than his. Your structure at the beginning was gay so dont do that anymore. Punches were the same as his, weak. How do u expect to diss him sayin if Jesus taught u rap u'd be peaceful. Thats not a battle verse! Thought one line stood out in the battle that came from your verse. It wasnt amazing but at least you had a punch. And It got you the win.

I did this while doing 5 other things the at same time
And your still consentrating for an hour on the same line?

V/ SpeatsBeats

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