Battle Rules:

2 min max
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

alrite dawg just spit asap

i'll drop tonight or tmoz

gud luck

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-18-05 at 01:27 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Premanition has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-15-05 01:27 PM.

Phenom-in-all has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-16-05 04:50 PM.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/dwmusic.htm

^^Audio Link^^

http://phenominall-----------27.com...&num=1101868068

^^Pics of him and his crew^^

this Canadian bitch can suck dick
you be hearin wot say like I sed it in the pulpit
shootin with a full clip
you be wearin red so I hit you like a bull hit
your dull spits, leave a lot to be desired
I was on the phone like I thought that kid retired
But my barz be so tight that you at em with the plyers
Your face up on the flyers
But im using em for nothing but some fuel upon the fire
Like Mariah, you getting dumped down by a white boy
You think you dope but that shits just the hype boy
Goodnight boy and goodnight to ya crew
Man I seen less species in the capital zoo
Y’all makin less sense together than a catholic jew
Am I rattlin you that wot I set out to do
I don’t fail at anything got Cinderella her shoe

So you got yourself a deal with some slander outlet
But that about as real as pamela’s assets
You ain’t rich dawg theres a reason for blank cheques
Rap ain’t gud to you jus giv you seasonal bank debts
And Regrets, why you battling prem
Hit the floor with them newbs you can battle again
Ye im ahead of them men, i give em no second chance
Bitch You shittin yourself you got a hole in ya pants
You ain’t mr keen I show you discipline
Ya momma realised her mistake and fed you nicotine
You an ugly bitch you make the mirror scream
Tryner punch premonitions like a pillar beam

^^Lyrics^^

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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/vendetta01music.htm

Lyrics on the page.

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ps - thanks for checkin out the pics of my crew... except that kinda scares me :s

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peepin' polls....................................... nice batte

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Voted For: Phenom-in-all

Premanition- I like the beat and the way you flowed on it.
Your flow from the start till fuel upon the fire was good. 1-2 Multis....Punches ehhh....Personals were ok

Fave Line -
you be hearin wot say like I sed it in the pulpit
shootin with a full clip
you be wearin red so I hit you like a bull hit

Worst Line-
Am I rattlin you that wot I set out to do
I don’t fail at anything got Cinderella her shoe
^^ The Fuck?

Overall Nice Verse: 8/10

Phenom- This for you was a Personal Feast...Alot Of Good Personals...Multis Eh...Punches>Personals So You Aced That

Fave Line-
loser... Why you gon go and call out the best
Did you forget the KO I last stamped on ya forehead?

Worst Line-
Ya thats right, heres another KO for Prem see
How could I possibly lose, battlin a femcee....OWNED

Overall: 9/10 cuz of personals

Voted For: Phenom-in-all

phenom clearly gets this preminition soun ds like hes talkin he had good lyrics but fukked up and had horrible flow and delivery phenom once again u got good flow and good delievery i like your lyrics so it woulda been closer if prem had flow and a voice for it sorry dude no hate just an honest vote return tha favour

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Voted For: Phenom-in-all

Phenom - Flow was good, delivery was good,
Punches were good..personals were ok..he isnt a femcee


Premanition - DMX beat Im suprised you didnt bark...flow was goood...punches are ok...personals lacked.... and some of ya punches are played like the

You shitted on yourself with a hole in your pants something like that


Vote = Phenom

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Yo MSee look Ock..

Am I rattlin you that wot I set out to do
I don’t fail at anything got Cinderella her shoe
( remember the Cinderella story..and how the Prince failed to return her shoe and needed help, he meant he doesnt need help beating him..and if he was the prince he'd return Cinderellas shoe without problems)

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Voted For: Phenom-in-all

PHENOM-good flow, decent delivery(really use a $5 mic?)but your concept with the punches was pretty sick,lol, the verse throughout was solid, a couple muffled areas but it was still good considering the punches you sprang off with...ovaries line was my fav, had me in stitches....
PREM-pretty good prem, kept the flow well throughout but your pause in the middle kinda made the verse falloff, punches were ok, i liked one, but it wasnt as hard hitting of a verse as phenom had, work on your punches,...thats the only thing in my eyes you were lackin in this battle...

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!

up..... lets close this.....................................

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just thought id come in here n say...damn i cant belive phenom is undefeated here...jesus...after CALI gets it...Phenom gets it

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