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Check in by: 05-23-05 at 12:36 PM

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Carlton Banks has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-20-05 12:40 PM.

talents what i hold, and i advise you troop to get it now.
because you've been written off, more than a fucking pen-pal!
your falling off, if you think you can win, drop max in the ring.
cuz your watered down verse will only put a damper on things.
i'm an alias yup, identity hidden no wonder jimmys scared...
cuz i'd send you up the creek, but i can see your already there.
got ko'd in korv, so now hes desperate for poetical notions..
so he stepped in k-bees just to try and toy with my emotions!

last bar= he got knocked out of korv by a keystyle, and hes recently done more topical and poetry than text...get it!?

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(Jimmy Pocketz) has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-20-05 09:05 PM.

Out of 161 Posts.U only dropped "Shits"Like "Dumpin" ova Hill
Its Funny Cuz Your only Way of Elevation is Jumpin ova Will
Carlton Couldnt get "TrailzBlazein" if he was Bastien Tel-Fair
They Didnt tell you Ya Cuzzin.Iz the only 1 Rappin in Bel-Air
Cant "Fly" ya Weight Here.ok.Let me get outta ya Way Fass
Like Uncle Phill Wrestlin Jeffrey.Carl im Outta Ya Weight Class
Believe it or not..I alwayz wanted to Jump your Moms Bones
U Lost this its "Not Unsual".Give it up &Go Listen to Tom Jones


Bastien Tel Fair is on the Portland Trail Blazers
He is a FLY WEIGHT
and Tom Jones sings Its Not UNsual..which is carltons
fav song and singer...

*Nuff Said*

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Bumpin this Knockout.................................

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straight verse, but you know that "not unusal" line has been used in every one of my battles chump. but anyways upping..

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lets get some voting going down here..
upping this.

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Voted For: Carlton Banks

Out of 161 Posts.U only dropped "Shits"Like "Dumpin" ova Hill
Its Funny Cuz Your only Way of Elevation is Jumpin ova Will
Nah....4/10
Carlton Couldnt get "TrailzBlazein" if he was Bastien Tel-Fair
They Didnt tell you Ya Cuzzin.Iz the only 1 Rappin in Bel-Air
Meh...5/10
Cant "Fly" ya Weight Here.ok.Let me get outta ya Way Fass
Like Uncle Phill Wrestlin Jeffrey.Carl im Outta Ya Weight Class
[B}So foreced, you had to say Fass instead of Fast...3/10[/B]
Believe it or not..I alwayz wanted to Jump your Moms Bones
U Lost this its "Not Unsual".Give it up &Go Listen to Tom Jones
Coulda worded this better....6/10

Overall: 18/40


talents what i hold, and i advise you troop to get it now.
because you've been written off, more than a fucking pen-pal!
Funny...6/10
your falling off, if you think you can win, drop max in the ring.
cuz your watered down verse will only put a damper on things.
Word...6/10
i'm an alias yup, identity hidden no wonder jimmys scared...
cuz i'd send you up the creek, but i can see your already there.
Meh...5/10
got ko'd in korv, so now hes desperate for poetical notions..
so he stepped in k-bees just to try and toy with my emotions!
Hahaha....7/10

Overall: 24/40


Carlton Banks came harder in this with better, harder punches..

Vote: Carlton Banks

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Voted For: (Jimmy Pocketz)

boooooooooo @ carlton FAKES y do have an alias datz gay...aneway i have 2 go with jimmy....he played off dat fresh prince of bel air shit and i was feelin it shit was funny...cartlon i had some creative shit but last couple lines were very weak he had no real personals...everybody knowns he got koed in korv tell us somthin we dont know fam..

jimmy.p:
Out of 161 Posts.U only dropped "Shits"Like "Dumpin" ova Hill
Its Funny Cuz Your only Way of Elevation is Jumpin ova Will
^^^LMAOOO GOOD OPENER
Carlton Couldnt get "TrailzBlazein" if he was Bastien Tel-Fair
They Didnt tell you Ya Cuzzin.Iz the only 1 Rappin in Bel-Air
^^^^DOPE....
Cant "Fly" ya Weight Here.ok.Let me get outta ya Way Fass
Like Uncle Phill Wrestlin Jeffrey.Carl im Outta Ya Weight Class
^^^LMAOOOOOOOO YO I LIKE DIS PUNCH
Believe it or not..I alwayz wanted to Jump your Moms Bones
U Lost this its "Not Unsual".Give it up &Go Listen to Tom Jones
^^^^SOMBODY SAID DIS 2 HIM ALREADY IN A ANOTHER BATTLE...BUT U WORDED IT BETTA


cartlton banks:
talents what i hold, and i advise you troop to get it now.
because you've been written off, more than a fucking pen-pal!
^^^GOOD OPENER...VERY ORIGINAL
your falling off, if you think you can win, drop max in the ring.
cuz your watered down verse will only put a damper on things.
^^^DECENT
i'm an alias yup, identity hidden no wonder jimmys scared...
cuz i'd send you up the creek, but i can see your already there.
^^^WACK...TELLIN PPL UR AN ALIAS WONT HELP U WIN
got ko'd in korv, so now hes desperate for poetical notions..
so he stepped in k-bees just to try and toy with my emotions!
^^^OKAY...

V/JIMMY.....

RETURN DA FAVOR BOTH OF YA'LL.....OR I WILL SEND A VIRUS 2 YA COMPUTER

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"Wordz Ahgod has DECLINED this battle on 12-20-06 09:49 PM.

This thread has been automatically closed."

^^he's scared.lol

Wow carl your vote wasent explained at all...but itz coo ima leave it

only vote u gone get 4rm a kid who hatez me

*Nuff Said*

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