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No Crew Votes
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Minimum posts to vote: 300

Check in by: 05-28-05 at 08:00 PM

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Stanza has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-25-05 10:43 PM.

OneStepBeyond has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-26-05 07:02 PM.

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you're fuckin stupid... parapledgics are paralized from the waist down.. hahahaha... and what open mic do i have with no replies?

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OSB:
structure: 8/10
Flow: 8/10
Punches: 8/10
Personals: 7/10
Enjoyed: 6/10
Overall: 40/50

Stanza:
Structure: 8/10
Flow: 8/10
Punches: 7/10
Personals: 3/10...none of them was accurate
Enjoyed: 8/10
Overall: 38/50

Stanza lost because he had inactuare prsonals if not it couldve been a tie

v/OSB

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

Im One Step away from Goin Beyond Your Lyrical Status
If wackness Came In Pounds We Know Youd be the fatest
Dope opener. Nice diss. And a nice punch

Over 1,000 Post & Training and yet Your Text Still aint right
Bcuz Youll Get No Votes Like the Replies in Your "Open Mic"
Ight personal. Not all that good of a punch tho

This dude is Scared Stiff So ill Bury His Body 6 Feet deep
He Gonna Regamortis & Choke up as if he was battling me
Nice personal on tha first line, but i wasnt feelin tha second

Yeah Last Time I No showed So now Im Bout to come back
This Dude Supplies Less Punchez Than a "Paraplegic" Match
Ight ender. Not all that hard hitting


Personals were coo for me, but yo punches were just ight. I wasnt feelin em too much. I think you couldve came harder. I dont kno if its just how u worded them or what, but i wasnt feelin most of em. Your opener is ur dopest bar, which is bad. that should never be your best. that made tha rest of ur verse boring. so i doubt i can give u my vote

OSB VERSE:
Hes intimidating? Right.. I've finished waiting, land some hits?
You're a wannabe slim shady..... But we all know 'Stanz'a bitch,
ha! funny shit. Nice wordplay. Nice punch, and a tight ass personal

Dropped from TBN, we'd beat them, knowin we ownin them punks,
...Chunkin a cup of kool-aid is the only way you throwin a punch,
.. this was tight as fuck. I liked that punch. It was hard hitting. Flawless.

Come on dawg... don't handle it rudely, against me battlins loony,
Bitch the only time you grab a win is when you're handin it to me,
Not really a diss towards him. I can see what you were sayin, but you made it sound stupid. Wordage here was a factor

"My internet was down, I ain't duck you," i've had enough of lies,
If the connection was down then why did your stats say other wise,*
Ight personal. Not all that great, but ight

O.G. don't talk about em' Drop an album, its still on the shelves,
Only way you makin the crowd 'clap' is if their killin themselves...
HAHAHAHa. even better ender

I really liked this verse. I seen alot of creativity, and alot of nice unplayed concepts. Wording your punches were on point, except 4 maybe 1 bar, but other than that, you were there. I liked tha few personals, but I'ma give this win to you, simply because of punches. You were just more consistent wit em, and they hit harder.


No hate to either one of you. Nice battle, but OSB gets my HONEST vote.

rtf.....link in sig....


Removed by M-Eazy's request

uhhh, wow, stanza......just to comment on your parapalegic punch

they do infact have hands, and actually, a parapalegic has complete paralysis from the waist and down, so they still can use their hands, that they infact have

i think the term you were loooking for was "quadripeligic", but the funny thing is, they still have hands too....just can't use 'em...

nice verse OSB, word

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Aii Man ok ..........A Lil mad over in that corner aint ya ? LOL

Wateva still Uppin for more votes

Polls....good drop my boy.........................

Also, your definition for paraplegics is wrong Stanza...

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I KNow i used the wrond word ..............Watch how i whole lotta people try to bitch about it LOL

i won anyway so it don't really matter.............

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I removed my vote because you didn't return it like I asked.