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Old 06-21-05, 12:48 AM   #1
MaRVJay
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verbal shoota vs MaRVJay1009

IP: 28AD 5545

Battle Rules:

10-12 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no checkin polls(4 da voter's)

lets fuckin go...2 da voter's if u not gon explain ya shit...dont vote

Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 06-23-05 at 12:48 AM

Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in.


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Old 06-21-05, 07:04 AM   #2
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Verbal Shoota has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-21-05 07:04 AM.
 
Old 06-21-05, 11:50 AM   #3
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Old 06-21-05, 12:02 PM   #4
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u even said 'dude jay is so nice',when ppl say u 2 gay its so rite.
cuzz da last time u had a "hot-punch" it was "kool aid with no ice".
now i got da rite 2...just kill verbal cuzz i really dont like dude.
so sombody gon be "signin a death certificate" but it wont be "ice cube".*
ya girl's a real slut suck me off till my 'sunz rise' like its "6 in da mornin".
put a shot in ya stomach & like "old piano's" ima get "rid ya ORGaNS".
pmin me everyday 2 join his crew....but only hoe's run with him.
and dis kid's punchlines like "shaq sneaker's"....."no 1 gets em".
dis nigga luv's battlin on a cpu..but me i wanna get off instead.
he like "spider man with a dry mouth" all he do is "spit on da web".
u like ya 'avy' just "alot of lip".....lil bitch u wont fight got a greasy mouth.
a criminal? lol only time u had a "open-case" u was taken a "cd-out".


*ice cube's 1st album was called da death certificate
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Old 06-22-05, 09:02 AM   #5
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LOL.....marvjay, SMH.

Dude, you's a has-been....everybody says so.....check out time, man..


You're Rhymes played out the same time as the numbers in ya' name
queens u claim that run game? shit...I'll analyze the MC you've became
No personals, Weak flow...most hated, But yo....you ''RUN RV?''
How?...last time i checked, ya' rep was D/R'S n you still lost too E.C
I could swear...you wannabe me, even took the time too sig a fake quote
on that note...we all dyin too know...how ya verses even get One vote?
Name a user who wouldnt abuse-ya, son....... like a bloodied Juvenile
wRappin a ball of yarn is the only time you got text-style[textile]
rv in denile? or is it you?...last i heard, weak ass couldnt even find a crew
My puns leave ya pale as dandruff..
but ya always knew i'm head & shoulders above you like the shampoo
You shootin? ha!
didnt even make us look, disgracin' the rhyme book, Immitatin NAS
C'mon dog, you even get beat in a no-show battle, just ask...DAZ!



No explanations needed....we all know the personals an shit on this little nigga Marv....[nas closer is because he got nas in the sig an reppin queens an has the nas quote in his sig]



Dont base you're vote on any ''stretched lines''...'cause there ain't none an that's just a lame excuse too vote against somebody....explain it also like the rules says.....good luck marv.
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Old 06-22-05, 11:16 AM   #6
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009



MarvJay1009:

u even said 'dude jay is so nice',when ppl say u 2 gay its so rite.
cuzz da last time u had a "hot-punch" it was "kool aid with no ice".
Decent..6/10
now i got da rite 2...just kill verbal cuzz i really dont like dude.
so sombody gon be "signin a death certificate" but it wont be "ice cube".*
Blah..4/10
ya girl's a real slut suck me off till my 'sunz rise' like its "6 in da mornin".
put a shot in ya stomach & like "old piano's" ima get "rid ya ORGaNS".
Hot Punch..7/10
pmin me everyday 2 join his crew....but only hoe's run with him.
and dis kid's punchlines like "shaq sneaker's"....."no 1 gets em".
Nice Metaphor..7/10
dis nigga luv's battlin on a cpu..but me i wanna get off instead.
he like "spider man with a dry mouth" all he do is "spit on da web".
Haha Nice..7/10
u like ya 'avy' just "alot of lip".....lil bitch u wont fight got a greasy mouth.
a criminal? lol only time u had a "open-case" u was taken a "cd-out".
Haha..Decent..6/10

Overall: 37/60

Verbal Shoota:

You're Rhymes played out the same time as the numbers in ya' name
queens u claim that run game? shit...I'll analyze the MC you've became
First Line Was Decent but 2nd Wack..4/10
No personals, Weak flow...most hated, But yo....you ''RUN RV?''
How?...last time i checked, ya' rep was D/R'S n you still lost too E.C
BLah..4/10
I could swear...you wannabe me, even took the time too sig a fake quote
on that note...we all dyin too know...how ya verses even get One vote?
Not Feeling This..3/10
Name a user who wouldnt abuse-ya, son....... like a bloodied Juvenile
wRappin a ball of yarn is the only time you got text-style[textile]
Ok Ok...6/10
rv in denile? or is it you?...last i heard, weak ass couldnt even find a crew
My puns leave ya pale as dandruff..
but ya always knew i'm head & shoulders above you like the shampoo
Hmm..Ok..5/10
You shootin? ha!
didnt even make us look, disgracin' the rhyme book, Immitatin NAS
C'mon dog, you even get beat in a no-show battle, just ask...DAZ!
Its Dah-Z...Not Duh-Z LMAO..Weak..3/10

Overall: 25/60

Vote - MarVJay1009

~R~

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Old 06-22-05, 11:21 AM   #7
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Old 06-22-05, 12:12 PM   #8
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Old 06-22-05, 12:43 PM   #9
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

this was a real close battle very close both had hard hittin punches but marv punches hit harder verbal had some nice personals and i didnt see that many personals in marv verse but the problem with ya verse was these two lines:
"rv in denile? or is it you?...last i heard, weak ass couldnt even find a crew
My puns leave ya pale as dandruff..
but ya always knew i'm head & shoulders above you like the shampoo
You shootin? ha!"
they didnt make any sense so it threw ya verse givin marv the win but both of you had good verses which is good good battle
V/marvjay1009

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Old 06-22-05, 12:49 PM   #10
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This was feedback posted for Verbal Shoota

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checkin this out for my Boi Teph .......Nice drop man
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Old 06-22-05, 12:50 PM   #11
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Old 06-22-05, 03:46 PM   #12
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Old 06-22-05, 05:20 PM   #13
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Old 06-23-05, 01:56 AM   #14
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Old 06-23-05, 09:32 AM   #15
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fake quotes in the sig, hate votes by r-rated an black queen

removed....
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