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Check in by: 08-11-05 at 02:52 PM

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Closed - Expired / old battle win

Kon has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-05 01:22 PM.

send-ya-troops, i 'choke you out' worse than 'nuclear holocast', smokin a blunt, with 'lung cancer', and-a-noose...
im the new reaper in R.A.W you can ask a 'friend-or-two', you can call me Hitler the way imma put and end-to-jew(you)...

as my punches 'pound-ta-ya-face' with an 'ounce-of-this-rage' i 'denounce-ya-fame'...
cuz you 'beatin me' is 'unheard of', like seein someone actually pronounce-ya-name... (marvenjay1009)

marv, beating me is harder then making water BENT or TWIST...
couldnt 'feel ya shit' if my hand was 'up your ass' like a 'ventriloquist'...

I tried to be nice but u had to be a bitch so i got one thing to say FUCK-YOU...
i'm like a Judge in a court cuz I'm always couple of steps ABOVE-YOU...

marve u about to get Served and Burried..
still thinkin theres chance to win?,
you must be 'High-man'(Hymen) like Virgin-Cherries...

Apoc tha 'dick gymnast' 'swinging from pricks' After my shit youll turn ‘forums into sex activities’ postin ya ‘fuck this thread’ fits //*

Religious? Ya last ray of hope diminished
cuz its like kon burning ya bless'in like my heat was fryin christans'...

Face it, ya pathetic in scripts, ya stuck jockin district....
notice u aint on no crew, probley cuz he get more 'fuck no's' than nasal porn flicks.. EZ!!

EASY!!!! mother fucker.....


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MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-05 01:51 PM.

u aint fuckin with marv son,matter fact ima ya dad u marv's son.
dis kid's "stupid & dont use rubber's" ima call em "KON-DUMB".
why u goin against me fam?..uve seen me merk da shit out of vets.
u gon text 4 life cuzz u aint comin out with da "3,4 letters in da alphabet".*
rv watch dis lame cuzz he aint gota brain..kon u aint neva pop'd ya thing.
u got guns but u neva "use ya arms" like u "playin in a soccer game".
ur down with da worse crew on rv.......yeah i see u screamin R.A.W.
but only reason u "ahead of ya time" cuzz u was "born premature".
dis muthfucker is hype...sayin he gon merk marv its nothin but hype.
but when "atl braves fans r chantin" they talkin about da luv of his life.**
i key'd dis verse 4 dis corny nigga cuzz i aint tryin da write..
kon do show's afta a bar tell dis "holyfield" nigga 2 "Drop da iRON MiC".


*3,4 letter's in da alphabet/CD...get it
**if u eva seen da atl braves basball team's fans chant they..HOEEEEE HOOOOEEEEEE...u'll get it

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"Wordz Ahgod has DECLINED this battle on 12-20-06 09:49 PM.

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^^he's scared.lol

lmaooooooo i had 2 quote dat shit dat was da funnyest bar eva

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"Wordz Ahgod has DECLINED this battle on 12-20-06 09:49 PM.

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^^he's scared.lol

heres how i voted

kon - your structure was horrible. u had some decent wordplay. some lines didnt make sense. like this one:

Apoc tha 'dick gymnast' 'swinging from pricks' After my shit youll turn ‘forums into sex activities’ postin ya ‘fuck this thread’ fits //*

first off who is Apoc? secondly u got a star at the end like u supposed to explain..so with that said..u coulda easily copy and pasted this bar..

i really didnt like ur verse cause all of ur bars structures were different..the jew(you) lines are all played. the best line in ya verse was probly the 2nd bar cause it was the only real personal



Marv J - i enjoyed readin ya verse. great personal with that first bar. i think jus that bar killed his entire verse. the soccer game line had me laughing. you had more personals than kon. ur structure was better which made the flow more smooth.



with that said..Marv J wins this battle. but damn i can only leave feedback

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

send-ya-troops, i 'choke you out' worse than 'nuclear holocast', smokin a blunt, with 'lung cancer', and-a-noose...
im the new reaper in R.A.W you can ask a 'friend-or-two', you can call me Hitler the way imma put and end-to-jew(you)...
^^poor wordplay..jew/you...terrible...2/10
as my punches 'pound-ta-ya-face' with an 'ounce-of-this-rage' i 'denounce-ya-fame'...
cuz you 'beatin me' is 'unheard of', like seein someone actually pronounce-ya-name... (marvenjay1009)
^^wtf...his name is prounceable...2/10
marv, beating me is harder then making water BENT or TWIST...
couldnt 'feel ya shit' if my hand was 'up your ass' like a 'ventriloquist'...
^^set-up bad...punch basic...2/10
I tried to be nice but u had to be a bitch so i got one thing to say FUCK-YOU...
i'm like a Judge in a court cuz I'm always couple of steps ABOVE-YOU...
^^weak..weak..weak!!....2/10
marve u about to get Served and Burried..
still thinkin theres chance to win?,
you must be 'High-man'(Hymen) like Virgin-Cherries...
^^OK...your best bar so far...4/10
Apoc tha 'dick gymnast' 'swinging from pricks' After my shit youll turn ‘forums into sex activities’ postin ya ‘fuck this thread’ fits //*
^^NO....2/10
Religious? Ya last ray of hope diminished
cuz its like kon burning ya bless'in like my heat was fryin christans'...
^^not a punch.....1/10
Face it, ya pathetic in scripts, ya stuck jockin district....
notice u aint on no crew, probley cuz he get more 'fuck no's' than nasal porn flicks
^^nasal porn flick?..meh...good ...best bar.....6/10

Ok...weak.Had some decent multis in there..but you used them bad...they didn't seem to enhance your flow much.And the hypens to point out multis isn't neccesary.I saw you had attempts at wordplay...but it was horrible.

u aint fuckin with marv son,matter fact ima ya dad u marv's son.
dis kid's "stupid & dont use rubber's" ima call em "KON-DUMB".
^^Good nameplay.....6/10
why u goin against me fam?..uve seen me merk da shit out of vets.
u gon text 4 life cuzz u aint comin out with da "3,4 letters in da alphabet".*
^^hmm..creative......6/10
rv watch dis lame cuzz he aint gota brain..kon u aint neva pop'd ya thing.
u got guns but u neva "use ya arms" like u "playin in a soccer game".
^^played...2/10
ur down with da worse crew on rv.......yeah i see u screamin R.A.W.
but only reason u "ahead of ya time" cuzz u was "born premature".
^^bad.....2/10
dis muthfucker is hype...sayin he gon merk marv its nothin but hype.
but when "atl braves fans r chantin" they talkin about da luv of his life.**
^^first line..shouldn't a used hype twice..good punch tho..6/10
i key'd dis verse 4 dis corny nigga cuzz i aint tryin da write..
kon do show's afta a bar tell dis "holyfield" nigga 2 "Drop da iRON MiC".
^^ok....5/10

Ok...seen you do better.But you owned this still in my opinion.HAd some played lines in here tho..like the soccer and premature ones.But there were creative ones like the braves and KOn dumb.Flow stayed on point.Structure was good too.

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"Wordz Ahgod has DECLINED this battle on 12-20-06 09:49 PM.

This thread has been automatically closed."

^^he's scared.lol

Voted For: Kon

nice verse, u deffinitley won dude.........just aint voten

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shit my bad meant to be feedback.......please remove vote

y0 tHaT sHiT wUz FiRe SuN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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^^ight im not gon vote then

Apoc tha 'dick gymnast' 'swinging from pricks' After my shit youll turn ‘forums into sex activities’ postin ya ‘fuck this thread’ fits //*



^^dog you bit that from rapflava.com

it was a battle that a nigga named APOCALYPSE was in