Battle Rules:

10- UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
be honest.
goodluck

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-01-05 at 08:50 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Cash Complex has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-28-05 08:54 PM.

don't go more then 16, no one wants to read an extremely long battle.........

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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance

my poetry:
untitled

chip has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-29-05 03:18 PM.

how the fuck did u become commander-in-chief?/
i step on the flow he 'kicks' like im standin-on-sneaks/
this heat'll leave you missing like your textual record/
you go both ways in this game like sexual checkers/
raps not your'e match, so i'll call you a genre dyke/
dissin my sigs the only way this kid's gettin on the mic/
yall may be like "this kid Cash's conceited"/
but dont blame me, its his shitty raps that pre-concieved it/
hey, at least its still possible for you to win chip/
because all the votes you get dogg, they from your kinship/

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even on text, this man choke like a clone of b-rabbit,
his cash complex like his rhymes; he still don't have it,
how does a poet kill a textcee in a battle or song?,
don't know, just read this, i'm hittin this herb like a bong,
and best believe this clown brings no punches,
he just a actor, this just practice, i'll off him with one of my crunches,
i'm a soldier, used to ride with TTI,
now just for fun, i'm makin this newbie cry,
but hold on, before i get off topic,
his rhymes belong in a toilet, i guess u could say he bring that hot shit,
here's some advice for next time, dont' go for the best first, cuz believe me
this battle's done like my breakast dog, over easy.....

^like always, don't vote if u don't get it.....

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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance

my poetry:
untitled

uppin (just because somebody says 'dont vote iyou dont get it' doesnt mean their punches are better or more complex than the average, usually its just a disclaimer to make it seem so; if you dont get it its the authors fault for making it that way"

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^wtf......... lmao @ u playa, it's not that serious...... uppin for votes, and if u don't get a punch, don't vote, call it what u will, but i think that's common sense..........

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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance

my poetry:
untitled

uppin............................................. .................................................. .............

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Voted For: Cash Complex

and best believe this clown brings no punches,
he just a actor, this just practice, i'll off him with one of my crunches

VS

raps not your'e match, so i'll call you a genre dyke/
dissin my sigs the only way this kid's gettin on the mic/
hey, at least its still possible for you to win chip/
because all the votes you get dogg, they from your kinship/

Ok..I gotta go with cash complex here.He owned in creativity.
Chip's verse had a better flow,but he had far too many played lines.Like,the toilet/hot shit,breakfast/over easy,and the B-rabbit one.I also didn't like how you mentioned the TTI thing.Just didn't have any purpose here...so i guess that's just filler.

Vote-Cash Complex

Drop an honest vote in the link below
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=215673

vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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chip up it ho................................................ ......................

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uppin come on chip stop bein a baby

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Voted For: Cash Complex

Ok

chip:

even on text, this man choke like a clone of b-rabbit,
his cash complex like his rhymes; he still don't have it,
- This is an ok personal
how does a poet kill a textcee in a battle or song?,
don't know, just read this, i'm hittin this herb like a bong,
- No, too basic, and not a good rhyme either
and best believe this clown brings no punches,
he just a actor, this just practice, i'll off him with one of my crunches,
- No, plus the flow went a bit off
i'm a soldier, used to ride with TTI,
now just for fun, i'm makin this newbie cry,
- So?
but hold on, before i get off topic,
his rhymes belong in a toilet, i guess u could say he bring that hot shit,
- No...lol...your starting to kill yourself with that line
here's some advice for next time, dont' go for the best first, cuz believe me
this battle's done like my breakast dog, over easy.....
No

Flow was off at times...not a single decent punchline, rhyming was basic most of the times....

Cash Complex -


how the fuck did u become commander-in-chief?/
i step on the flow he 'kicks' like im standin-on-sneaks/
- Not really workin...bad opener
this heat'll leave you missing like your textual record/
you go both ways in this game like sexual checkers/
- Nice set-up, but what the hell are sexual checkers? bad...
raps not your'e match, so i'll call you a genre dyke/
dissin my sigs the only way this kid's gettin on the mic/
- Doesn't really make sense...
yall may be like "this kid Cash's conceited"/
but dont blame me, its his shitty raps that pre-concieved it/
- This is ok...
hey, at least its still possible for you to win chip/
because all the votes you get dogg, they from your kinship/
- No...not workin

You had no line that really stuck out to me...it flowed well, and your rhyming was good and consistant throughout with the multis at the end

Ok, both verses were not strong in fact weak in many ways....both need to improve on the quality of punchlines especially for the future

I really could have voted either way...

But for two reasons

1) 'his rhymes belong in a toilet, i guess u could say he bring that hot shit' - this line backfired...
2) Complex having better rhyming...

I am voting for Cash Complex....

Stay Up both though