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Old 12-08-05, 04:55 PM   #1
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Nick Fletcher vs Daubs

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Nick Fletcher vs. Daubs

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Crew Votes Allowed

No Biting
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No Dickriding
No Hate
No Bullshit


Winning Conditions

3-0 = KO
4-1 = TKO

If neither requirement is met after a period of 21 days, the person with the most votes wins. If the votes are all square, the battle goes into sudden death with the next vote deciding the winner.

Minimum posts to vote: 400

Check in by: 12-09-05 at 03:55 PM

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Old 12-08-05, 06:30 PM   #2
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Nick Fletcher has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-08-05 05:30 PM.
 
Old 12-08-05, 07:36 PM   #3
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http://img1.imagetitan.com/img1/1/10/daubs.jpg

Nice picture you gay fucker.
I'm going to fucking crush your wack ass forced wordplay and gay ass punches. You're weak kid.


Daubs, he don’t look too happy, but to me it’s no surprise
He’s suffering a mutual separation, right between his fucking eyes.
Get a mirror son, if looks could kill then you’d be dead
No wonder why ya eyes are trying to flee ya fucking head.
Ha! Bite the 3-line bar style to try and disguise ya stretched blows
Its ok, Daubs is elevating trying to build a bridge,
……………longer than his nose!!
Shit son, I could put you down all day, even rag on ya fake ID
But I don’t need aids to beat Danny, he told me he’s already got HIV.
Man I’m a fucking legend, and voters please don’t throw a fit
Cuz Daubs would self-glorify to, but he ain’t accomplished shit!!
Fucking faggot. Drop forced wordplay, how do ya expect to beat me?
With a verse looking like a pro………fucking cheap and easy.
Bash you with kicks and punches, kid you ain’t in with a shout,
I’ll send a snapshot to ya face so ya can picture me knockin’ you out.
But fa’real, kid you’ve elevated maybe you’ll win the next fight
And I hear its been a long time coming.…no wait, that’s your sex life!!
Fat fuck, ya got titties to be a bitch, ya chances are lookin’ thinner
So watch me break this chick in, and serve it for Christmas dinner.
Hell man, I’m an alcoholic, but I’m still gone piss on you
Cuz I’ll crush ya spirits…………and down them fuckers to.
U do hold a tag victory over me, but ya still full of crap
I will say though, ya beat us E.C, but Daubs..you were wack.
Look dick, I’m the better at this shit, and frankly you don’t got skill
You’d only ever be on a roll if I fucking pushed you down a hill.
Dude, that’s a fact…facing me again, I’ll smack you around
And firmly plant your name in history, after I run you into the ground.
Daubs will fuck up, then watch me drop the hammer
And capitalise on Daubs lines, like basic fucking grammar.
This dude is really wack, he’s poor and always droppin’ more shit
Him winning, he’d bet his bottom dollar, but he can’t afford it.
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Old 12-08-05, 08:05 PM   #5
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used to be dope, now your a joke..you cant spit sick
season, its like RV's winter..nobody wants to picnic
your mourning, i would too, you aint a soldier nick
cause theres ALSO the PLL i fucking owned you in
You said me and my fam are gay? Fuck what you said
cos your usertitle points at the only fag in the thread
nick hurts the best and then he injure's the fake
then he gets spul gets involved...to jizz injure face
grill this fucker, so his click and my posse knows
cut this weiner through his meat so this sausagerolls
call your self jesus, thats ironic and you know this ish
i mean, the only reason i let you in is cause the crucifix
aliases galore,KS,king solo,nick fletch n more, calm it bruva
they all got the same problem,the same wack user as each other
im known to wipe the floor with fags, and soon youll know it
cos then atleast its clean when i flop this fat cunt onto it
newbie bashin wins...you aint a vet, your a rookie not a novice
cause what kind of super dope fucker has nearly 20 FL losses
battle of the month contender you wanted, im sorry to spoil it
cos hows it gonna be worthy if ya punches arent fit for the toilet
heres the news, you aint got a chance, ya boring dude
only shot you got is if your DR hits the RV awards too
im taggin this stuck up faggot, n' not ya hair in the morning
n' you did spit hotshh until me n EC KO'ed em from the tourney
your lanky,deranged,spotty,big headed AND a fat fuck
shit, now ive run out of words to describe your bad looks
you wack fuck, you aint good you fuckin ruin everything it dude
you went and joined living legends, and fuckin ruined that too
cant get no luck and no wins, no wonder your abusive you joke
you struggle making the lists of people who USED to be dope


meh.
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Old 12-08-05, 08:07 PM   #6
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Nice verse...
...good luck matey .
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Old 12-08-05, 08:41 PM   #7
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Voted For: Nick Fletcher

Daubs, he don’t look too happy, but to me it’s no surprise
He’s suffering a mutual separation, right between his fucking eyes.
Man I’m a fucking legend, and voters please don’t throw a fit
Cuz Daubs would self-glorify to, but he ain’t accomplished shit!!
Fat fuck, ya got titties to be a bitch, ya chances are lookin’ thinner
So watch me break this chick in, and serve it for Christmas dinner.
U do hold a tag victory over me, but ya still full of crap
I will say though, ya beat us E.C, but Daubs..you were wack.
This dude is really wack, he’s poor and always droppin’ more shit
Him winning, he’d bet his bottom dollar, but he can’t afford it.

Socrates worded the bottom dollar concept WAY better in KORV

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used to be dope, now your a joke..you cant spit sick
season, its like RV's winter..nobody wants to picnic
your mourning, i would too, you aint a soldier nick
cause theres ALSO the PLL i fucking owned you in
call your self jesus, thats ironic and you know this ish
i mean, the only reason i let you in is cause the crucifix
you wack fuck, you aint good you fuckin ruin everything it dude
you went and joined living legends, and fuckin ruined that too

v/NF

Eh, and the rest of his verse was more consistant, g/l to ya both
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Old 12-08-05, 09:28 PM   #8
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Word. Appreciate the vote. Nice job Daubs. Lets get more votes on this.
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Old 12-09-05, 12:28 PM   #9
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uppin............................................. ................
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Old 12-10-05, 12:07 AM   #10
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uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp ppp
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Old 12-10-05, 01:02 AM   #11
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Voted For: Nick Fletcher

Daubs-Your verse was ok, i expected a higher level of intensity coming from you. You had some good concepts for punches but i feel some didnt work. you had good personals/wordplay.

fave. lines

''used to be dope, now your a joke..you cant spit sick
season, its like RV's winter..nobody wants to picnic''

some good wordplay and punch.
you started off strong, but wasnt really consistant wit ya shit man
overall 7/10 good verse.


Nick Fletcher-Bravo man, your verse was good.You held my attention wit some nice punches/wordplay. you had some nice concepts that didnt pull through but had a higher intensity than ur oponnent

Fave lines.

''But fa’real, kid you’ve elevated maybe you’ll win the next fight
And I hear its been a long time coming.…no wait, that’s your sex life!!''

had me actually laughing man...good shit
overall you had a nice strong piece, ive seen better from you..but overall this did the job
overall 8/10

v/Nick fletcher..

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Old 12-10-05, 01:17 PM   #12
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used to be dope, now your a joke..you cant spit sick
season, its like RV's winter..nobody wants to picnic
...Dope
your mourning, i would too, you aint a soldier nick
cause theres ALSO the PLL i fucking owned you in
....Good
You said me and my fam are gay? Fuck what you said
cos your usertitle points at the only fag in the thread
...Punch was decent,set-up was shit..to say the least
nick hurts the best and then he injure's the fake
then he gets spul gets involved...to jizz injure face
..umm,injure=in your,right?...and you said "he" gets spul...sooo,based on that..this line is saying he'll get spul to jizz on the reader's face?..uhh,bad punch..I think if said then YOU get spul,it'd make more sense,as it'd be saying he's gay..so,yea.
grill this fucker, so his click and my posse knows
cut this weiner through his meat so this sausagerolls
...No,
call your self jesus, thats ironic and you know this ish
i mean, the only reason i let you in is cause the crucifix
...decent wordplay,1st line sucked..esspeccially the rhyming.
aliases galore,KS,king solo,nick fletch n more, calm it bruva
they all got the same problem,the same wack user as each other
..Good punch
im known to wipe the floor with fags, and soon youll know it
cos then atleast its clean when i flop this fat cunt onto it
...Nope.
newbie bashin wins...you aint a vet, your a rookie not a novice
cause what kind of super dope fucker has nearly 20 FL losses
...Well,1st line wasn't good,as he doesn't bash newbie's for wins,and MANY people on the site consider him as a vet.Punch was alsoa little weak,cuz while he's got nearly 20 losses,he's still got like 80 wins.
battle of the month contender you wanted, im sorry to spoil it
cos hows it gonna be worthy if ya punches arent fit for the toilet
...Should have made something on the battle of the month thing that he wanted as a punch,instead of going with a played line with the toilet thing.
heres the news, you aint got a chance, ya boring dude
only shot you got is if your DR hits the RV awards too
...Good
im taggin this stuck up faggot, n' not ya hair in the morning
n' you did spit hotshh until me n EC KO'ed em from the tourney
..Good personal
your lanky,deranged,spotty,big headed AND a fat fuck
shit, now ive run out of words to describe your bad looks
...Decent
you wack fuck, you aint good you fuckin ruin everything it dude
you went and joined living legends, and fuckin ruined that too
..Ehh,just wasn't feeling it.
cant get no luck and no wins, no wonder your abusive you joke
you struggle making the lists of people who USED to be dope
...Uhh,wtf?..Didn't like this one neither.



Daubs, he don’t look too happy, but to me it’s no surprise
He’s suffering a mutual separation, right between his fucking eyes.
...Good
Get a mirror son, if looks could kill then you’d be dead
No wonder why ya eyes are trying to flee ya fucking head.
....Decent
Ha! Bite the 3-line bar style to try and disguise ya stretched blows
Its ok, Daubs is elevating trying to build a bridge,
……………longer than his nose!!
...No,his nose isn't long,or at least it doesn't look like it in that picture of him
Shit son, I could put you down all day, even rag on ya fake ID
But I don’t need aids to beat Danny, he told me he’s already got HIV.
..Sounded forced.When refering to help,people don't ussually pluralize the word aid..they just say aid,not aids.
Man I’m a fucking legend, and voters please don’t throw a fit
Cuz Daubs would self-glorify to, but he ain’t accomplished shit!!
..Dope
Fucking faggot. Drop forced wordplay, how do ya expect to beat me?
With a verse looking like a pro………fucking cheap and easy.
...Decent
Bash you with kicks and punches, kid you ain’t in with a shout,
I’ll send a snapshot to ya face so ya can picture me knockin’ you out.
...hmm,decent
But fa’real, kid you’ve elevated maybe you’ll win the next fight
And I hear its been a long time coming.…no wait, that’s your sex life!!
..Forced.Long time coming?,That'd mean he cums for a long time,which isn't much of a diss.I know what your were attempting to say..but it doesn't work.
Fat fuck, ya got titties to be a bitch, ya chances are lookin’ thinner
So watch me break this chick in, and serve it for Christmas dinner.
...Your calling him a chick?wtf?..And in the first line,he's not fat...
Hell man, I’m an alcoholic, but I’m still gone piss on you
Cuz I’ll crush ya spirits…………and down them fuckers to.
...Not much of a diss,but ok.
U do hold a tag victory over me, but ya still full of crap
I will say though, ya beat us E.C, but Daubs..you were wack.
...Well,it's decent...but your kinda saying he beat u easy?The double meaning shit didn't work here.
Look dick, I’m the better at this shit, and frankly you don’t got skill
You’d only ever be on a roll if I fucking pushed you down a hill.
...Good
Dude, that’s a fact…facing me again, I’ll smack you around
And firmly plant your name in history, after I run you into the ground.
...Again,not much of a diss,but ok wordplay.
Daubs will fuck up, then watch me drop the hammer
And capitalise on Daubs lines, like basic fucking grammar.
...Good
This dude is really wack, he’s poor and always droppin’ more shit
Him winning, he’d bet his bottom dollar, but he can’t afford it.
...Good...

Well,this was a pretty decent battle,but I got to give it to Nick Fletcher.
Tho both verses had their flaws..I felt daubs ones hurt him more.
Nick Fletcher seemed to have some forced lines,and daubs seemed to have some lines that he didn't seem to put a lot of thought into..

Anyways..

Vote-Nick Fletcher.
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Old 12-10-05, 02:11 PM   #13
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Props nick .
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Old 12-11-05, 12:47 AM   #14
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Word. I don't think you came your best though.
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