Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-28-06 at 04:52 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Kriminal has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-27-06 04:53 PM.

I Guess Ya Rusty..Its Been A While Since Ya Name Was Last Announced
Not A Man But A Boy..Its Clear To Me This Lame Is Just Half An "Ounce"
You Fake Ass Nigga..Talkin Like You Pack Techs..
3-4? Are You Seriously Comin At Me Wit That Whack Rec
SHOTZ FIRED! "Made Ya Look" Like Im Spittin Wit Nas
This Kids Bars Is Played Like Old Movies...Because This Kids Just The "Wizard Of Oz"
This Faggot'll Lose..Cuz Krims Known For Strattlin Dudez
And Like His Title "Life Is Just" A Waste For Him.........
.............Cuz All This Nigga Battles Is Noobs
Underestimated The Kid..So Dont Be So Testy
Talkin Like A Dealer..When The Only Time You Fuckin Wit Oz's Is When You Drinkin Pepsi

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Oz. has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-28-06 10:24 AM.

PS
If you dont get it then dont vote please bcuz its a punch/wordplay in everyline so find it

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One Love

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Voted For: Kriminal

I Guess Ya Rusty..Its Been A While Since Ya Name Was Last Announced
Not A Man But A Boy..Its Clear To Me This Lame Is Just Half An "Ounce
(Good.)

SHOTZ FIRED! "Made Ya Look" Like Im Spittin Wit Nas
This Kids Bars Is Played Like Old Movies...Because This Kids Just The "Wizard Of Oz"
(A lil stretched,But Aiight.)

This Faggot'll Lose..Cuz Krims Known For Strattlin Dudez
And Like His Title "Life Is Just" A Waste For Him.........
.............Cuz All This Nigga Battles Is Noobs
(Irony?...LoL.)

Underestimated The Kid..So Dont Be So Testy
Talkin Like A Dealer..When The Only Time You Fuckin Wit Oz's Is When You Drinkin Pepsi
(Lol.)

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Kriminal Scared to Battle..You See He Bout White As His Teeth
Then He Felt How These Punchez Hit Bout As Hard As A Beat
(Okay.)

^That was it,The Rest was Played...No Hate,But You Had a Good Form..Nice structure,but You Kinda played him off for a noob...So Yah'Know.

Hit My battle up with an Vote me Vs H.D...Thanx.

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One Love

*Bridging The Rap*

Stanza Productions *Dem City Boys*

RTF On My Battle?.....I Guess Yall Think Youz dont Have Tahz Vote....Hit Mine Up.


Dont Be A Sour Grape.....j/p.

..........Uppin `1

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One Love

*Bridging The Rap*

Stanza Productions *Dem City Boys*

Voted For: Kriminal

hmmmm this battle was kinda one sided... Oz had superior structure, and it flowed nicely in my head... but that won't win you a battle, unless it's very close, and that's what gives your verse the extra push... With that being said Krim had the far better punches... weather personals or arbitrary...

Opener: Kriminal
Closer: Kriminal
Punches: Kriminal
Personals: Kriminal
Structure: Oz.
Multis: Kriminal
Enjoyment: Kriminal

Vote: Kriminal

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Voted For: Kriminal

i gotta hand this to K man....he came a lil more harder Oz......

creativity and wordplay plus a lil more punches got you wit an uppercut oz and just knocked you out homes.!

its was like 2 bars vs. 5bars

v/ Kriminal.

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