Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Prove it.

Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 03-18-06 at 05:38 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Win by forfeit

The Revelation has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-18-06 04:58 PM.

L*F*S ++ has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-18-06 04:59 PM.

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A battle with a 'Martyr', get beat hard like masterbation,
You shoulda saw this loss comin, aren't you a supposed 'Revelation'?
Sorry Sean but even on RV you're overlooked, never legit,
You got a typo, ya Custom Title should say 'Currently Writing: Shit",
I really wish I could go on but you want it inan hour and only put 6 to 8,
Guess I can't treat this like I RVS, and I really wanted to procrastinate,
Last bar, after this any pride you had will no longer remain,
What's that I hear, your tourney is dying? Run along and complain...

Shit drop. Whatever. lol

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pollz........damn was this personal???????????????

Nah, we cool and stuff. Just outta boredom really.

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Voted For: L*F*S ++

this was kind of a weak battle...maybe yall didn't care....or you just arn't that good....because i saw a glimpse of ability...so i'm asuming you can both do this.....anyways..i felt both verses were pretty weak...however you both had had a line or two that i liked....revelation...i liked this line...

door.
Ya, I went there, now go talk to your seductive mother cuz you better believe it,
I gave you the power to stretch ya penis cuz it would take a mile before we could see it.

that was fairly clever, and the braces line made me chuckle too...but the rest of yours was kinda weak....so....lets get to the next evrse


lfs.......your first bar was a fairly weak attempt at a personal...but you did attempt it......your 2nd bar....good shit.......3rd bar....nope...4th bar...not really...but it was okay..............being as how you both had a good bar, and a decent bar, i'm gonna give the nod to the guy who's bar i thought was the best....and had rhyme scheme......my vote goes to you lfs

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Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate.

"watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox

The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew

lol I didn't care about this. Gave me something to do besides beat off.

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Voted For: L*F*S ++

oh my fucking god...this battle was weak...I almost voted for rev cuz he had a lot of oppennings for punchlines but was too garbage to do em right. Im geving this to LFS off of flow and structure alone. both need to elivate and quit talking about how many lines are left or complaining about the rules while rapping cuz exepted the battle. v.... LFS

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

lmao This was a bullshit battle. Me and Rev are friends. lmao Funny shit.

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I don't believe I talked bout the rules, nope. If I explained half of the punches, you would get the personals, but I'm not a text head.

Also, this battle really isn't that weak, you all just don't get the personals.

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shit, maybe you guys really didn't try. or maybe you just should've explained your verses so that we all know wats so hot about them. u both been on the site for while so its only natural that people expect you to go at each other like 2 pits locked in the same cage. especially if your that cool with each other. some of us aint been following you guys around so we might not get your personals, just explain if you think its that hot dawg.

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

We don't care about the winner. It was more of a personal battle than anything. Just happens people can vote on the one that makes more sense to them. lol

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