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Old 12-19-03, 05:04 PM   #8
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Alright kids..listen up...Gather round and make sure you hear me...
Everyone thinks Evolve's dope!...but his origin's just a theory..

^Tight opener..heh

Shit's old and weary, I'll see what you went through to get ta this bout
So I stood up, walked a mile in your shoes...and they blew out!

^Seen the concept before, but tight either way...

Gloom's shroud, coverin you now...you'll never see'uh new dawn
When I smash your esteem...control and credit til your clout's gone!

^nice.

As crowds yawn...when you threaten to bust cans and their (eye)lids give
Facin me kid? I'll make ya say unnngh! more than Master P did!

^ight punch, gonna see it in frontlines if a newbie gets a see of this...

And yeah, your origin's ill, but it's over...you've met WiTs EnD
A lonely bitch..when Camarac aliases is his only circle of friends

^lmao.

Ready to kill again...
It's unhealthy to face me, test and put to rest your group of veteran fools
And I'm not talkin bout food..
When I run through your crew and leave nothin but fruits and vegetables

^lol. tight

It's inevitable.....I'm destined to take out bitches and ready maids
And you can call me weak....but I'm droppin this former Heavyweight

^ight closer...

Ight this was a ill verse, had its hards and just hitting. None of the punches were to die for but you had some funny as fuck ones. The flow was there, no forced and if there was I forgot. I like the Opener lines, Camarac lines and the fruits n vegetable ones. I didnt like the Master P shit, eventhough it was ight...




looky who, made it through, to round 2...
Lethargic, way To Go Man!!
but that's not ^^Congratulations.. its his Sexual Prefrence showin

^Lmao, tight opener.

im going.. Toe to Toe w/ this pansy, except.. i ain't Dancing homo
instead i'll flip THIS >KoNcEpT... & you can treat HIS ass like a Go-Go (sig)

^Tight.

i know.. Gay Jokes are a no no.. so, i'll dispose of the laughter then
what's Funny is...
i threw them in the trash & Lethargic dove in after them!!!

^LMAOLMAOLMAO!

listen Bitch..i'm Pounding you Dawg.. leaving you Locked & Caged
Rich came for an All Out War...
& Poor Lethargic barely has the Minimum Waged

^Ight.

lately, i been in a rage.. greatly due to Age.. yes, i aint lieing
when i say Lethargic is so Outdated.. his punches are Older than I AM!!! (now thats old)

^Lol.

you should quit trying, stop writing .. Lethargic is just the worst
but the voters never Sleep on your Name...
zzzzzz.. they just catch Z's while reading your verse!!

^Lol.

& it hurts.. to see someone as Sick as you.. be homeward bound
but don't worry kid...
i'll send a Get Well Card..... the second i get to the next round

^Tight closer..


E's style is energenic, witty and funny as fuck sometimes..Ya punches were in my view original, and smooth. No flaws.

My vote goes to Evolve, for punches and enjoyment...

Stay up chicos and upmost Respect.