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Verses Due: Friday 12-19-03
Voting Ends: Sunday 12-21-03

Act Like You Are Suppose To Be Here... Fuckers!!

Had to switch the 3 way because aisle 5 was banned

Alright...kinda glad. I hate 3-way battles.

Alright kids..listen up...Gather round and make sure you hear me...
Everyone thinks Evolve's dope!...but his origin's just a theory..
Shit's old and weary, I'll see what you went through to get ta this bout
So I stood up, walked a mile in your shoes...and they blew out!
Gloom's shroud, coverin you now...you'll never see'uh new dawn
When I smash your esteem...control and credit til your clout's gone!
As crowds yawn...when you threaten to bust cans and their (eye)lids give
Facin me kid? I'll make ya say unnngh! more than Master P did!
And yeah, your origin's ill, but it's over...you've met WiTs EnD
A lonely bitch..when Camarac aliases is his only circle of friends
Ready to kill again...
It's unhealthy to face me, test and put to rest your group of veteran fools
And I'm not talkin bout food..
When I run through your crew and leave nothin but fruits and vegetables
It's inevitable.....I'm destined to take out bitches and ready maids
And you can call me weak....but I'm droppin this former Heavyweight

lethargic: 1. physically slow and mentally dull as a result of tiredness, disease, or drugs

I Already Win Without A Verse Based On His Name...lol... Good Luck


Well, Well, Well......

looky who, made it through, to round 2...
Lethargic, way To Go Man!!
but that's not ^^Congratulations.. its his Sexual Prefrence showin
im going.. Toe to Toe w/ this pansy, except.. i ain't Dancing homo
instead i'll flip THIS >KoNcEpT... & you can treat HIS ass like a Go-Go (sig)
i know.. Gay Jokes are a no no.. so, i'll dispose of the laughter then
what's Funny is...
i threw them in the trash & Lethargic dove in after them!!!
listen Bitch..i'm Pounding you Dawg.. leaving you Locked & Caged
Rich came for an All Out War...
& Poor Lethargic barely has the Minimum Waged
lately, i been in a rage.. greatly due to Age.. yes, i aint lieing
when i say Lethargic is so Outdated.. his punches are Older than I AM!!! (now thats old)
you should quit trying, stop writing .. Lethargic is just the worst
but the voters never Sleep on your Name...
zzzzzz.. they just catch Z's while reading your verse!!
& it hurts.. to see someone as Sick as you.. be homeward bound
but don't worry kid...
i'll send a Get Well Card..... the second i get to the next round

Votes??

Nice verse...First people with their verses up...and still no...

VoteS FolkS?

Alright kids..listen up...Gather round and make sure you hear me...
Everyone thinks Evolve's dope!...but his origin's just a theory..

^Tight opener..heh

Shit's old and weary, I'll see what you went through to get ta this bout
So I stood up, walked a mile in your shoes...and they blew out!

^Seen the concept before, but tight either way...

Gloom's shroud, coverin you now...you'll never see'uh new dawn
When I smash your esteem...control and credit til your clout's gone!

^nice.

As crowds yawn...when you threaten to bust cans and their (eye)lids give
Facin me kid? I'll make ya say unnngh! more than Master P did!

^ight punch, gonna see it in frontlines if a newbie gets a see of this...

And yeah, your origin's ill, but it's over...you've met WiTs EnD
A lonely bitch..when Camarac aliases is his only circle of friends

^lmao.

Ready to kill again...
It's unhealthy to face me, test and put to rest your group of veteran fools
And I'm not talkin bout food..
When I run through your crew and leave nothin but fruits and vegetables

^lol. tight

It's inevitable.....I'm destined to take out bitches and ready maids
And you can call me weak....but I'm droppin this former Heavyweight

^ight closer...

Ight this was a ill verse, had its hards and just hitting. None of the punches were to die for but you had some funny as fuck ones. The flow was there, no forced and if there was I forgot. I like the Opener lines, Camarac lines and the fruits n vegetable ones. I didnt like the Master P shit, eventhough it was ight...




looky who, made it through, to round 2...
Lethargic, way To Go Man!!
but that's not ^^Congratulations.. its his Sexual Prefrence showin

^Lmao, tight opener.

im going.. Toe to Toe w/ this pansy, except.. i ain't Dancing homo
instead i'll flip THIS >KoNcEpT... & you can treat HIS ass like a Go-Go (sig)

^Tight.

i know.. Gay Jokes are a no no.. so, i'll dispose of the laughter then
what's Funny is...
i threw them in the trash & Lethargic dove in after them!!!

^LMAOLMAOLMAO!

listen Bitch..i'm Pounding you Dawg.. leaving you Locked & Caged
Rich came for an All Out War...
& Poor Lethargic barely has the Minimum Waged

^Ight.

lately, i been in a rage.. greatly due to Age.. yes, i aint lieing
when i say Lethargic is so Outdated.. his punches are Older than I AM!!! (now thats old)

^Lol.

you should quit trying, stop writing .. Lethargic is just the worst
but the voters never Sleep on your Name...
zzzzzz.. they just catch Z's while reading your verse!!

^Lol.

& it hurts.. to see someone as Sick as you.. be homeward bound
but don't worry kid...
i'll send a Get Well Card..... the second i get to the next round

^Tight closer..


E's style is energenic, witty and funny as fuck sometimes..Ya punches were in my view original, and smooth. No flaws.

My vote goes to Evolve, for punches and enjoyment...

Stay up chicos and upmost Respect.

Quality battle
Lethargic came good
Evolve came better
Stand outs from Lethargic:
It's unhealthy to face me, test and put to rest your group of veteran fools
And I'm not talkin bout food..
When I run through your crew and leave nothin but fruits and vegetables
Stand outs from Evolve:
i know.. Gay Jokes are a no no.. so, i'll dispose of the laughter then
what's Funny is...
i threw them in the trash & Lethargic dove in after them!!!

Both came nice, but in the end
Evolve had better punches and more consistency throughout his verse (Every bar was good)
Lethargic had 1 or 2 bars that were ok at best (The master P one was wack, lol)
Fairly Close battle
Props to both
Vote - Evolve

Ok .. 2-0 Me... Votes?

Dope battle ... Leth came aight in this battle ... Some aight punches ... But out-wieghed his verse with played concepts ... Shoulda came better I believe ... Evolve came in this battle knowin' that he was gonna win ... Therefore droppin' harder hittin' punches ... And wittier lines ... Juss out did Leth on every aspect in this battle and took it kind of easily in my opinion ...

Vote : Evolve

Lethargic

Alright kids..listen up...Gather round and make sure you hear me...
Everyone thinks Evolve's dope!...but his origin's just a theory..
1st filled, 2nd hit

Shit's old and weary, I'll see what you went through to get ta this bout
So I stood up, walked a mile in your shoes...and they blew out!
1st ok, 2nd kinda old concept-wise

Gloom's shroud, coverin you now...you'll never see'uh new dawn
When I smash your esteem...control and credit til your clout's gone!
weird

As crowds yawn...when you threaten to bust cans and their (eye)lids give
Facin me kid? I'll make ya say unnngh! more than Master P did!
1st weird, 2nd didnt make me forget

And yeah, your origin's ill, but it's over...you've met WiTs EnD
A lonely bitch..when Camarac aliases is his only circle of friends
HA HA HA HA HA

Ready to kill again...
It's unhealthy to face me, test and put to rest your group of veteran fools
And I'm not talkin bout food..
When I run through your crew and leave nothin but fruits and vegetables
1st weird, 2nd bluh

It's inevitable.....I'm destined to take out bitches and ready maids
And you can call me weak....but I'm droppin this former Heavyweight
1st blah, 2nd was old school



Evolve

looky who, made it through, to round 2...
Lethargic, way To Go Man!!
but that's not ^^Congratulations.. its his Sexual Prefrence showin
old soundin concept but ok a lil

im going.. Toe to Toe w/ this pansy, except.. i ain't Dancing homo
instead i'll flip THIS >KoNcEpT... & you can treat HIS ass like a Go-Go (sig)
blah, you said flip concept. .boo

know.. Gay Jokes are a no no.. so, i'll dispose of the laughter then
what's Funny is...
i threw them in the trash & Lethargic dove in after them!!!
finally, a good descent punch

listen Bitch..i'm Pounding you Dawg.. leaving you Locked & Caged
Rich came for an All Out War...
& Poor Lethargic barely has the Minimum Waged
didnt get it

lately, i been in a rage.. greatly due to Age.. yes, i aint lieing
when i say Lethargic is so Outdated.. his punches are Older than I AM!!!
funny punch, even the one on you

you should quit trying, stop writing .. Lethargic is just the worst
but the voters never Sleep on your Name...
zzzzzz.. they just catch Z's while reading your verse!!
kinda funny name punch, good

& it hurts.. to see someone as Sick as you.. be homeward bound
but don't worry kid...
i'll send a Get Well Card..... the second i get to the next round
blah finish


Overall
I think Evolve won somehow, damn he didnt have that many good solid punches. But Lethargics whole verse had either not hittn punches or ones that didnt make sense with the follow up, like no conclusion. He had some descent ones and almost edged. But im still dissappointed in Evolve for not droppin his hardest when he encourages us to do it.

im not breaking it down really long like they all did, because i didnt think this was a highlight battle for either of you. .

lethargic - an alright verse. but you dont come alrigght against evolve and expect to win, usually. this time it almost worked though. your punches were ok, but most of them were just average hittin. i didnt think your verse had any highlights honestly. nothin shitty, it was average, just no highlights.

evolve - an arrite verse i guess. i was expectin sumthin spectacular from you. i guess it sucks to be the sites best because of that. . anyway, you also had an arrite verse. it just seemed like neither of you tried very hard. this punch was the only one in the battle that stood out to me. .

i know.. Gay Jokes are a no no.. so, i'll dispose of the laughter then
what's Funny is...
i threw them in the trash & Lethargic dove in after them!!!

everything else was average from both. that line took it for evolve.

vote - evolve

AMEND...I'm not bitchin about your vote. I'm bitchin about the way you voted. If you don't understand punches...send a PM to me asking about it...and to Evolve...cuz you didn't get his minimum waged punch. My "weird" punches must have also been some you didnt understand. If you want...send me a PM about the punches and I'll explain them to you. As far as Evolve's...Minimum waged = Waging War...I have the minimum waged...get it? cool.