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Old 12-20-03, 03:34 PM   #8
Walter Wall
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fgee's verse
your challenge is so distant...ur just not the winning sort
he'd go to any length to beat me...and still end up short
7/10...good flipped concept
ah hell...Allegory tops Rb as the best... but i dont give a fuck
cos thats before he turned the chart ...the right way up
7/10....bit played, but nice flip
i cudnt believe how much u suck...then i saw ur past text..
passed audio, and anything else hip hop on the net!
6/10....meh, not feelin it
give it a rest...im afraid Gorys' eating me up...but not with a pen
cos he's the cannibal emcee...with a taste for men!
6/10.....decent punch
and before aisle 5 went and got banned....Allegory was on the verge
of coming last now you're just glad.... you cant come third!
5/10...I get it, but still meh
fuck this i cant be assed seriously...ive got writers block
and im smashing it on your behalf...leaving your head rocked
5/10....weak finisher

fgee=36/60=60%

Allegory's Verse
..what to do?..im comedical..fgee i'll smash u-
everyones laughing with me..why?..cuz im laughing at u!!-
8/10....haha, nice
..your past due...an example-lacking of elevation,herb-
easy to tell..styles still the same..9 months after he registered!-
6/10.....ok personal
..ya heard?..your info is bland, who are you...damn it...
& it was hard digging up dirt..considering..yer older than it!!-
6/10....ok...not bad
..Gory's landin it..lit..lucky registration dates show in yer game-
cuz its not obvious yer a vet...why?...just re-read your name!!-
5/10...meh
..shot yer fame...blabberin back flips...minds doin crunches-
& this kids lines are about as played..as RB porno punches!!-
5/10...not feelin it
..i'll run this...weak...this kids desperate for winning notions-
kid stepped foot n K-bees..just to try & toy with my emotions!-
6/10....good wordplay
..n love wit lotion..fgee's social life is separated,the girls stay far-
& its said..when yer last shot at Greatness...was in a gay bar!!-
8/10.....lol. nice
.....yer old...i'll backhand ya ego, and i'll..dent yer dome-
send u back to retirement..better yet..a retirement home!!-
6/10...decent finisher

Allegory=50/80=62.5%

This was close as shit
but I think Allegory edged out with an overall better verse
props to both
Vote - Allegory