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Verses Due: Friday 12-19-03
Voting Ends: Sunday 12-21-03

Act Like You Are Suppose To Be Here... Fuckers!!

Had to switch the 3 way because aisle 5 was banned

your challenge is so distant...ur just not the winning sort
he'd go to any length to beat me...and still end up short
ah hell...Allegory tops Rb as the best... but i dont give a fuck
cos thats before he turned the chart ...the right way up
i cudnt believe how much u suck...then i saw ur past text..
passed audio, and anything else hip hop on the net!
give it a rest...im afraid Gorys' eating me up...but not with a pen
cos he's the cannibal emcee...with a taste for men!
and before aisle 5 went and got banned....Allegory was on the verge
of coming last now you're just glad.... you cant come third!
fuck this i cant be assed seriously...ive got writers block
and im smashing it on your behalf...leaving your head rocked


blah cudnt be fucked...

..what to do?..im comedical..fgee i'll smash u-
everyones laughing with me..why?..cuz im laughing at u!!-
..your past due...an example-lacking of elevation,herb-
easy to tell..styles still the same..9 months after he registered!-
..ya heard?..your info is bland, who are you...damn it...
& it was hard digging up dirt..considering..yer older than it!!-
..Gory's landin it..lit..lucky registration dates show in yer game-
cuz its not obvious yer a vet...why?...just re-read your name!!-
..shot yer fame...blabberin back flips...minds doin crunches-
& this kids lines are about as played..as RB porno punches!!-
..i'll run this...weak...this kids desperate for winning notions-
kid stepped foot n K-bees..just to try & toy with my emotions!-
..n love wit lotion..fgee's social life is separated,the girls stay far-
& its said..when yer last shot at Greatness...was in a gay bar!!-
.....yer old...i'll backhand ya ego, and i'll..dent yer dome-
send u back to retirement..better yet..a retirement home!!-

G'luck

Gh05t!

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fgee

your challenge is so distant...ur just not the winning sort
he'd go to any length to beat me...and still end up short
1st blah, 2nd kinda old concept-wise

ah hell...Allegory tops Rb as the best... but i dont give a fuck
cos thats before he turned the chart ...the right way up
1st was descent, but poor follow-up

i cudnt believe how much u suck...then i saw ur past text..
passed audio, and anything else hip hop on the net!
bleh, not feelin it

give it a rest...im afraid Gorys' eating me up...but not with a pen
cos he's the cannibal emcee...with a taste for men
1st descent hittin punch

and before aisle 5 went and got banned....Allegory was on the verge
of coming last now you're just glad.... you cant come third!
another descent one, yay

fuck this i cant be assed seriously...ive got writers block
and im smashing it on your behalf...leaving your head rocked
not good for a last line




Allegory

..what to do?..im comedical..fgee i'll smash u-
everyones laughing with me..why?..cuz im laughing at u!!-
blah, kinda weird

..your past due...an example-lacking of elevation,herb-
easy to tell..styles still the same..9 months after he registered!-
i chuckled

..ya heard?..your info is bland, who are you...damn it...
& it was hard digging up dirt..considering..yer older than it!!-
another funny

..Gory's landin it..lit..lucky registration dates show in yer game-
cuz its not obvious yer a vet...why?...just re-read your name!!-
another weird set up thingy

..shot yer fame...blabberin back flips...minds doin crunches-
& this kids lines are about as played..as RB porno punches!!-
i didnt get it actually

..i'll run this...weak...this kids desperate for winning notions-
kid stepped foot n K-bees..just to try & toy with my emotions!-
too topical sounding, blah

..n love wit lotion..fgee's social life is separated,the girls stay far-
& its said..when yer last shot at Greatness...was in a gay bar!!-
i remember a line with this same shit, booo

.....yer old...i'll backhand ya ego, and i'll..dent yer dome-
send u back to retirement..better yet..a retirement home!!-
better then fgee's last

Overall
i think Allegory won with more consistent punches, fgee had a bland moment or something. But i suspect that one line but i dunno if its just cause its an old concept or not.

vote - fgee.
because allegorys punches were arrite to begin with, and so were fgee. fgees opener was better. both had some played ass punches. fgee just a little better overall, basically because allegory came with more bars that were just filler anyway.

fgee's verse
your challenge is so distant...ur just not the winning sort
he'd go to any length to beat me...and still end up short
7/10...good flipped concept
ah hell...Allegory tops Rb as the best... but i dont give a fuck
cos thats before he turned the chart ...the right way up
7/10....bit played, but nice flip
i cudnt believe how much u suck...then i saw ur past text..
passed audio, and anything else hip hop on the net!
6/10....meh, not feelin it
give it a rest...im afraid Gorys' eating me up...but not with a pen
cos he's the cannibal emcee...with a taste for men!
6/10.....decent punch
and before aisle 5 went and got banned....Allegory was on the verge
of coming last now you're just glad.... you cant come third!
5/10...I get it, but still meh
fuck this i cant be assed seriously...ive got writers block
and im smashing it on your behalf...leaving your head rocked
5/10....weak finisher

fgee=36/60=60%

Allegory's Verse
..what to do?..im comedical..fgee i'll smash u-
everyones laughing with me..why?..cuz im laughing at u!!-
8/10....haha, nice
..your past due...an example-lacking of elevation,herb-
easy to tell..styles still the same..9 months after he registered!-
6/10.....ok personal
..ya heard?..your info is bland, who are you...damn it...
& it was hard digging up dirt..considering..yer older than it!!-
6/10....ok...not bad
..Gory's landin it..lit..lucky registration dates show in yer game-
cuz its not obvious yer a vet...why?...just re-read your name!!-
5/10...meh
..shot yer fame...blabberin back flips...minds doin crunches-
& this kids lines are about as played..as RB porno punches!!-
5/10...not feelin it
..i'll run this...weak...this kids desperate for winning notions-
kid stepped foot n K-bees..just to try & toy with my emotions!-
6/10....good wordplay
..n love wit lotion..fgee's social life is separated,the girls stay far-
& its said..when yer last shot at Greatness...was in a gay bar!!-
8/10.....lol. nice
.....yer old...i'll backhand ya ego, and i'll..dent yer dome-
send u back to retirement..better yet..a retirement home!!-
6/10...decent finisher

Allegory=50/80=62.5%

This was close as shit
but I think Allegory edged out with an overall better verse
props to both
Vote - Allegory

Both came with a few played punches. Neither verse impressed me by any means. Just not feelin this battle at all. I think this came down to who had the more consistent punches. To me that was..

Vote ~ Allegory