Thats pretty funny..

i liked it some of the flow was off but it was phat

Shit, you showed him yo, now look at what flows
Blood from his ears throat and even his fucked up nose
I can see by the cold glare where once was his poor eyes
Either He’s been lyrically overdosed or verbally lobotomized
Peeps just not gonna openly believe he just O.D.’ed himself and died
I concede we wrap him in clean sheets, and feed him to the deepest creek we find

^ that was a phat ass verse..nice job