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word murder
IP: AB9E 70D5
a 60 cent/OG collab
********************************************** ...the haunting beat starts................ 60 into: Standin above the Fallen Body- My Eyes fill As I Begin to Cry Gotta Ask Myself Why, and Did this Man Really Deserve To Die Maybe He Shudnt Have Said, Some of The things He Let be known Head an Heart Heavy- the Victim Broken, The Murderer speaks with overgrown OG ok Lyrikill take it slow you sound hysterical is this a joke What your say’in cant be so you cant sleigh a man with flow 60 He Deserved It Overgrow-He a Snake Talkin Bout Me Behind My Back I Tried To Let It Slide-Homies Told Me To Cut him Some Slack So I Did-But when I Heard The Latest-I Cudn't Beleive He drop So low Dissin me-Sayin "Played"-"Wackness"-An That The WizeMan Has No Flow OG Alright that’s fine he had it com’in but you act like he died just from frontin yet You deny takin any action that may explain the reason of his passin if you didn’t rhyme his ass blind then who do you suppose gored out his “I’s” why is hung from the chorus hook from one of his corny wornout rhymes 60 Honest, I Was Just Sittin There Chillin-Wit No intent Of Me Killin When We Began To Do battle-I cud See He Had a Weakness Claimin "Rhyme-Style" He Said I cud Never Out Reach His I Showed My Flow-Before I Know, He Hits The Floor an I go for the door But Instead Of Runnin And Hidin-I Keep Spittin an Spittin My Style An Meta-Phors To His Head They Kept Hittin An Hittin OG Shit, you showed him yo, now look at what flows Blood from his ears throat and even his fucked up nose I can see by the cold glare where once was his poor eyes Either He’s been lyrically overdosed or verbally lobotomized Peeps just not gonna openly believe he just O.D.’ed himself and died I concede we wrap him in clean sheets, and feed him to the deepest creek we find 60 No That Sounds Too Risky-He’ll Turn Up Soon or Later I Just Know Like a Turd in The Toilet-He’s Bound to Break The Surface and Float Well I Didn’t Really Wanna Harm Him-But I Think We Outa De-Arm-Him Cut Off his Head With a Crack of an Ax-Butcher His Legs Up ta the Caps Then He’ll Fit nice in a Bag-Sprinkle Wit Lime and Bury Out Back OG) hold up… what was that, I think I just saw his lip move!! 60) I Think I Saw him Move Too- Thought This Dude was’a Dead Issue 60) I Think He’s Tryin to Speak-Did You Hear What He Just Said? OG) he whisperd, “your rhymes are still weak, and he flows better than you half dead” 60) WHAT!! Fuck It Ovagrown-Hand Me That Brush 60) Im Gonna Knock this ameatur's Teeth into Touch OG) now before you loose your temper and finish this fool off once and final OG) I think I have the answer to our dilemma but it hinges on his survival OG) Since he’s engrossed in’a comatose condition, I say we road trip ta “Neverland Mansion” OG) leave him in line with his fly open and blame it on perverted Michel Jackson 60)/OG) {laughing} fo'sho OG) consider it handled 60) Then We Better Get Crackin… ...the beat fades..................................... ********************************************* feedback rating... peace OG |
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IP: CFFE 3708
Thats pretty funny..
i liked it some of the flow was off but it was phat Shit, you showed him yo, now look at what flows Blood from his ears throat and even his fucked up nose I can see by the cold glare where once was his poor eyes Either He’s been lyrically overdosed or verbally lobotomized Peeps just not gonna openly believe he just O.D.’ed himself and died I concede we wrap him in clean sheets, and feed him to the deepest creek we find ^ that was a phat ass verse..nice job |
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IP: B4D0 5D2D
thanks Doc, can you point out what part didnt flow. your help is appreciated.
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