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this was a very well writtin poem, it had very good vocab you described things with lots of detail but i felt you could have made it longer, because I felt it wasn't finished, it was very good I jst feel you showed good understanding of this and0could have kept going maybe 2 more stanzas, but all in all great peice.
If you have time, can you check my 'The Weathers Art' thanks
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