B.I. Detained - You had some good punches in there. The structure was good. You didnt lack vocab, and didnt over use it. The world play was also pretty good. This could have used personals, but the opener was enough I guess...

E.Coli - You had punches, but I felt they were being forced. Your flow stayed on, and had an interesting rhyme scheme. The punches just didnt hit really hard, with the exception of one. You could have taken advantage of the fact he didnt use personals and used some on him. But that didnt happen...

Vote - B.I. Detained

Nice battle, just seemed one sided from my perspective...

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