I KNO THE FEELIN I DEF CAN RELATE TO THIS SHIT..short and simple but sweet sweet i loved only vice i can give is if u tryna elevate u could work on poetic qualities NICE PIECE THO..keep it up..

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my head is clouded with senseless doubt
but this seems to be my only escape route
so ill slither my way across the ground
to avoid my blyndedsoul from being found
~*~YOU LIVE YOU LEARN~*~