I see you as more than a friend, even though I keep it within.
Heart stops, one word from you and it starts beating again.
Now becoming inhabitants at the mere sound of your voice.
You've got me smiling like a child that's surrounded by toys.
I swear nigga, my soul doesn't reflect the blue skies you see.
I hate to see you cry, but I just love it when you cry for me.
Kept it inside of me, ya not my man, it's not worthwhile liven.
Yeah it's a man's world, but it ain't nothing without woman.
Thought of you, sudden rush, true love, far from a crush.
You're a nigga that I hate because I love so much.
'Royal Blue

Well....... If I may ask a question? Was this about somebody or were you just flowin from the top??

Anywho this was just for who ever you wrote it for can't be for anybody else. It's a little dry but sometimes poetry seems that way to others when they don't know. So all in all it was okay but needs more creativity.

keep doin what ya doin 1

thanks..yeh is about someone else.. someone who has me by a string and if he hurts me, it doesnt matter.. ill take him right back.. yeh.. later

aww that is too sweet lol!

I KNO THE FEELIN I DEF CAN RELATE TO THIS SHIT..short and simple but sweet sweet i loved only vice i can give is if u tryna elevate u could work on poetic qualities NICE PIECE THO..keep it up..

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my head is clouded with senseless doubt
but this seems to be my only escape route
so ill slither my way across the ground
to avoid my blyndedsoul from being found
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