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Old 12-28-03, 07:21 PM   #10
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this sum funny shit.....props to ya

i saw tha title and thought..."dopeness"......dno why, jus did....
the way you used the companys slogans in ya rhymes was dope and it made me laff......

favourite bar...

Checked the tyme...8:02...so in 13 my break was over
she went "tyme is against u" so i told her...bend over
roflmmfao

shit was funny as hell...........

luvvin da topic and everythin.....
i think that if you used a better vocab then it wouldn't have had the same effect on the laughter......
this a funny piece...........

stay up......................................peace
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