this was ok......KuZ ya Flow was alright and ya used it good and ya structure worked out Pretty Well.....so ya have a lil Potential but Make Ya Topics That You Relate to Not One about Some One else well thats wast i think anyway.....so ya Vocab could Use Some work but still Nice man Ya Use this topic well.......so this was alright could uya Hit Up any one Of My Open Mics In My Topic.....Consider this Upped...PeacE...