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World Without Reason by Snakeyes

I have to turn this in as an assignment for school. I know it needs work, but please be honest. And don't just tell me the structure needs work. Enjoy!


In a trailer park on the borderline of Detroit
lived a cursed family... a mother and two boys
the first born burst into the underground rap scene
while the second stayed home with the worst thing in things
Debbie with her smoky naps and her drug injecting
The rapper made a name for himself... a name above men
which later he would use to proclaim his game... he was called Eminem
the rapper was a ten when he wrote the unsuccessful Infinate
which he penned when he was jobless and hopeless in the ditches
he continued underground until his fuckn' voice was found
and he would rebound when at the rap olympics he would be sound
int he last round he almost had first place
but he slipped up and lost... standing in frozen frost like a disgrace
even though the white kid with the mike took home second
I reckon later that day he would get a phonecall
Dre was enthralled by whitties ability to battle
Dre was in a small squall when his last record flopped
so when Shady crawled in... he had to take the shot
The plot got thicker when Shady signed on the dot
So this is the famous "rags to riches" story we all know
from a fuckn' rapper who grows through the flow
I love this guy and fuckn' aspire to be in his shoes
because being a white rapper is no excuse to lose