Feeble's Verse
amend knows his careers a fake, no need to remind him. .
cuz how'd u get 12 worthy text defeats with only 9 wins?
5/10....meh, u forgot about LLL wins, lol
in combined wits, i'm the finest, & you're not elite-bred. .
cuz volve summed up ur rb life in the tourney beef thread. .
6/10....decent personal

quote:
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Originally posted by Evolve
Hey AMEND...If You Left... No One Would
Miss You Anyway...
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with that said, this cats dead, cuz tourneys kill this kid. .
& im not even callin` you wack. . im callin you its affiliate. .
6/10...decent punch
filled w/ shit, coulda been a rap celeb, woulda been fun as shit
but he set foot on the red carpet. . & i pulled it out from under him
8/10...haha, nice
im wonderin, DID the voters read ya sig? cuz you've taken the vanest course
cuz I read it. . & if fears your carriage. . . then i brought the reins & horse
6/10...ok wordplay
tamed & coarse, & the economies shown its encasin the nation
cuz when i slide on the Losses. . his head faces Inflation. .
7/10...good
about break his foundation. . i pondered what to fucking do??
& i decided, screw it. . . it already needed a construction crew
6/10....meh, not bad
ya luck was blew. . this schmuck is thru, cuz its time to go
& your not just lacking structure. . ur lackin rhyme & flow. .
4/10....ugh, too newbish
timeless modes, play u like a parker bros. game, its odd to me
cuz I slide on the Risk when u get in the way of my Monopoly. .
5/10....played concept, could of been worded better
no stoppin me. . they render me iller, you pretend to be killer
& he's dope in ten lines. . but goin` 20 the other ten'll be filler. . .
5/10...too simplistic, a weak finisher

Feeble=57/100=58%

Amend's Verse

Can U Guess Who Im Thinkin Of, & I'll Drop Some Clues. . .
He Should Of Lost In Round 2, & He's The Mod Of Newbs
4/10...wasted bar....ure punch was like a setup
Its Probably You, Feeble Kyle - Just Attempt A Jokes Effort
Which By The Way. . .
. . .Comes From A Mod Who Reset His OWN Record
5/10...I get the refrence but meh, ure just stating facts
No Effort, Feeble's Dont Deserve It, & Stick With Topics, K
I Predicted Your Next Thread: "What Super Mods U Hate?"
5/10...why? I wasnt feelin this one either
For Help, We Should Put Ya Verse In Open Mic & Show It
So When People Reply, Finally. . .They Just Might Quote It
7/10....nice
Nice Wrotes, But Fucka Feeble - & Any Poem You Spit Too. .
Cause We're All Still Waitin To See 'Where The Net Gets U'
5/10...ugh, Ive heard this plenty of times
Just Quit Dude, This Aint Your Type Of League, & Until It Is. . .
. .'Mend'll Just Leave Ya Ready To Quit Like The Realist Did
7/10....decent personal
Time To Kill This Kid, & Unlike U - 'Mend'll Free Your Lines
Just Goes To Show U. . .
. . .Nothing Ever Good Is Thought Of From Feeble Minds
6/10...decent, but quite played
People Lie, We Dont Want You Here, So Stay In Open Mics
Is That A New Style, Looks Familiar, For Mimic Poet Dykes
5/10....ok punch but wasnt feel'n it as a finisher

Amend=45/80=55%

No hate...Both have come better in the past
but In my book, Feeble showed a bit more creativity, consistency
and came with a slightly overall better verse

Vote- Feeble Minded