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Verses Due: Friday 12/26/03 @ 11:59 pm EST
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How many feeb.?

i'll go the full 20 if your willing to. .

edit: please dont read my verse until he shows. once you read again, any verse wont seem as good. thank you.

Sure. .

peep his sig before readin` for max effect. .

. . hey, i said read his sig. . BITCH!
amend knows his careers a fake, no need to remind him. .
cuz how'd u get 12 worthy text defeats with only 9 wins?
in combined wits, i'm the finest, & you're not elite-bred. .
cuz volve summed up ur rb life in the tourney beef thread. .



with that said, this cats dead, cuz tourneys kill this kid. .
& im not even callin` you wack. . im callin you its affiliate. .
filled w/ shit, coulda been a rap celeb, woulda been fun as shit
but he set foot on the red carpet. . & i pulled it out from under him
im wonderin, DID the voters read ya sig? cuz you've taken the vanest course
cuz I read it. . & if fears your carriage. . . then i brought the reins & horse
tamed & coarse, & the economies shown its encasin the nation
cuz when i slide on the Losses. . his head faces Inflation. .
about break his foundation. . i pondered what to fucking do??
& i decided, screw it. . . it already needed a construction crew
ya luck was blew. . this schmuck is thru, cuz its time to go
& your not just lacking structure. . ur lackin rhyme & flow. .
timeless modes, play u like a parker bros. game, its odd to me
cuz I slide on the Risk when u get in the way of my Monopoly. .
no stoppin me. . they render me iller, you pretend to be killer
& he's dope in ten lines. . but goin` 20 the other ten'll be filler. . .

20. match it, hoe.

Im A Homo Fuck & Shouldnt Be Posting Here

Im A Homo Fuck Who Shouldnt Be Posting Here

Did feeble get mad? Or was it one of his Dick Riders?
We might never know...

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Can U Guess Who Im Thinkin Of, & I'll Drop Some Clues. . .
He Should Of Lost In Round 2, & He's The Mod Of Newbs
Its Probably You, Feeble Kyle - Just Attempt A Jokes Effort
Which By The Way. . .
. . .Comes From A Mod Who Reset His OWN Record
No Effort, Feeble's Dont Deserve It, & Stick With Topics, K
I Predicted Your Next Thread: "What Super Mods U Hate?"
For Help, We Should Put Ya Verse In Open Mic & Show It
So When People Reply, Finally. . .They Just Might Quote It
Nice Wrotes, But Fucka Feeble - & Any Poem You Spit Too. .
Cause We're All Still Waitin To See 'Where The Net Gets U'
Just Quit Dude, This Aint Your Type Of League, & Until It Is. . .
. .'Mend'll Just Leave Ya Ready To Quit Like The Realist Did
Time To Kill This Kid, & Unlike U - 'Mend'll Free Your Lines
Just Goes To Show U. . .
. . .Nothing Ever Good Is Thought Of From Feeble Minds
People Lie, We Dont Want You Here, So Stay In Open Mics
Is That A New Style, Looks Familiar, For Mimic Poet Dykes
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& Only In 16

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Dont post in here dick. . .

lol^....

anywayzz....dis wuz a good battle...i enjoyed it....
but my vote iz going to Amend....
he just came more wittier....
and had some decent personals....
feeble...you came good...i just didn't see....
anything in your verse....dat really impressed me any...
but u still had a decent verse....i just don't think it was....
up to par wit Amend's though....so my vote....
goes to Amend with a overall better verse....

good battle...stay up u guyz...

* dis aint no hate vote or d/r vote....Amend or Feeble...
if u dont won't it to count...den dont count it...
just stating my opinion...*

Gh05t!

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a shawty both of ya'll was killing but i'ma have da give it up to my nigga amend ,yo' you got some killa rhymes ,but you aint on my level yet ,but keep trying one day you might beat me .,but on da reel much luv@------>>>-->

Feeble's Verse
amend knows his careers a fake, no need to remind him. .
cuz how'd u get 12 worthy text defeats with only 9 wins?
5/10....meh, u forgot about LLL wins, lol
in combined wits, i'm the finest, & you're not elite-bred. .
cuz volve summed up ur rb life in the tourney beef thread. .
6/10....decent personal

quote:
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Originally posted by Evolve
Hey AMEND...If You Left... No One Would
Miss You Anyway...
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with that said, this cats dead, cuz tourneys kill this kid. .
& im not even callin` you wack. . im callin you its affiliate. .
6/10...decent punch
filled w/ shit, coulda been a rap celeb, woulda been fun as shit
but he set foot on the red carpet. . & i pulled it out from under him
8/10...haha, nice
im wonderin, DID the voters read ya sig? cuz you've taken the vanest course
cuz I read it. . & if fears your carriage. . . then i brought the reins & horse
6/10...ok wordplay
tamed & coarse, & the economies shown its encasin the nation
cuz when i slide on the Losses. . his head faces Inflation. .
7/10...good
about break his foundation. . i pondered what to fucking do??
& i decided, screw it. . . it already needed a construction crew
6/10....meh, not bad
ya luck was blew. . this schmuck is thru, cuz its time to go
& your not just lacking structure. . ur lackin rhyme & flow. .
4/10....ugh, too newbish
timeless modes, play u like a parker bros. game, its odd to me
cuz I slide on the Risk when u get in the way of my Monopoly. .
5/10....played concept, could of been worded better
no stoppin me. . they render me iller, you pretend to be killer
& he's dope in ten lines. . but goin` 20 the other ten'll be filler. . .
5/10...too simplistic, a weak finisher

Feeble=57/100=58%

Amend's Verse

Can U Guess Who Im Thinkin Of, & I'll Drop Some Clues. . .
He Should Of Lost In Round 2, & He's The Mod Of Newbs
4/10...wasted bar....ure punch was like a setup
Its Probably You, Feeble Kyle - Just Attempt A Jokes Effort
Which By The Way. . .
. . .Comes From A Mod Who Reset His OWN Record
5/10...I get the refrence but meh, ure just stating facts
No Effort, Feeble's Dont Deserve It, & Stick With Topics, K
I Predicted Your Next Thread: "What Super Mods U Hate?"
5/10...why? I wasnt feelin this one either
For Help, We Should Put Ya Verse In Open Mic & Show It
So When People Reply, Finally. . .They Just Might Quote It
7/10....nice
Nice Wrotes, But Fucka Feeble - & Any Poem You Spit Too. .
Cause We're All Still Waitin To See 'Where The Net Gets U'
5/10...ugh, Ive heard this plenty of times
Just Quit Dude, This Aint Your Type Of League, & Until It Is. . .
. .'Mend'll Just Leave Ya Ready To Quit Like The Realist Did
7/10....decent personal
Time To Kill This Kid, & Unlike U - 'Mend'll Free Your Lines
Just Goes To Show U. . .
. . .Nothing Ever Good Is Thought Of From Feeble Minds
6/10...decent, but quite played
People Lie, We Dont Want You Here, So Stay In Open Mics
Is That A New Style, Looks Familiar, For Mimic Poet Dykes
5/10....ok punch but wasnt feel'n it as a finisher

Amend=45/80=55%

No hate...Both have come better in the past
but In my book, Feeble showed a bit more creativity, consistency
and came with a slightly overall better verse

Vote- Feeble Minded

Vote Feebs

Gotta go w/ feebs on this... he just seemed to be a little more
original & creative with his punches...

fav lines

Feebs
im wonderin, DID the voters read ya sig? cuz you've taken the vanest course
cuz I read it. . & if fears your carriage. . . then i brought the reins & horse

AMEND... this aint a hate vote ... i thought your verse was pretty
good but your punches were all pertaining to him being a mod...
nothing really outside of that... so

Vote Feebs