Thread: Cold Hate
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Old 12-29-03, 12:36 PM   #5
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nice piece... definitely!
You set the whole mood for this piece in your first stanza, which made me immediately wondering what you were going for.
Comparing all insecurities/problems/hate we go through with snow, was just really wow, ... very clever.
Loved every single line of this, hope to read more soon.
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