^^ you dont have to do that anymore, the rule with that is gone now

about the piece, your intro was pretty good, the part i liked most about it was that first question, who am i among billions? with the sad answer of nobody. that made me more interested, i wanted to see where you were gonna take this.

your vocab was alright, and flow and structure were good. i liked the short lines, with simple explaintions, but still something were just underwater and you had to read carefully and think about it.

your emotions were pretty strong, and i feel i understand where your coming from and what your feeling somewhat.

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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