rated - This was an alright verse, kinda week from what you brought to battles befor. You had good flow, and good structure. I liked a couple of punches in there, could have used some personals. You had some alright word play as well...


Meta- You aso had an alright verse. There was a nice flow, and all of that. I dont like it when // is put at the end of lines though. I liked your word-play, and the creativity. But alot of punches could have hit harder from my perspective.

Vote - Meta

Conclusion
I didnt like the opener and the closer of rateds verse. that really threw me off. You could have came with better punches, both of you could have accually. But I think Meta just hit harder with it...

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