*On Probation*
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Ok for all you faggots who just say it's wack... YOUR WACK... Give the kid constructive critisizm.. Ok man the flow at the start was nice.. Multi's was cool.. But you really gotta learn how to punch and get solid personals... Use mroe wordplay to get witty.. The best thing to do in a diss is to make people laugh.. So try and be funny with your punchs... Get at me on aim for help ( BlaCkDaZe001 ).. Keep at it kiddo.. Peace
SOE HOLLA
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