THE*REIGN*MAN
Dis faggott bitch steaming shit cant ruin my flow//
let me introduce dis pussy, hes a part time ho//
not a bad opener... 5/10
tellin everyone how u a lunatic, and feeling sick//
well dats da side effect of u suckin too much dick//
lol, gettin funny now... 6/10
stop boastin bout ur cash pussy, actin all rich//
dat moneys comin threw coz u get fucked like a bitch//
nice concept there... hit hard that punch did tbh... 8/10
u transexual low-life wich, u feelin the tension//
u look like a fuckin penis wid a constant erection//
dont really understand this lol....3/10
u will neva have the skills to compete lyrically//
if i ever see u, im fuckin u up chump, physically//
this was a nice bar man.... liked that^... 8/10
and im not talkin bout how men serve u in bed//
im talkin bout a piece of metal, goin threw yo head//
i gotta bullit bitch, dats gona fuckin strike u dead//
again, nice... 7/10
i jus throw up da middle finger as a hint of a sign//
da same middle finger dat went threw yo mommas line//
lol, back to the mother disses... *sighs*... nice tho... 6/10
overall... 43/70
not a bad verse... you need to work on structure man... keep elevatin tho... ur doin well...
RAPPER_BIGGA
Here we go again fuckin right //
I'm battling this bitch who we all know is shite //
wack opener tbh... 3/10
Textbooks, another title of the new gay sex books //
Claiming your the best, join are crew //
Your the queer in the mirror wishing your dick grew //
lol, made me laugh... good... 7/10
little maggit, pouncin around like a faggit //
vaciline tubes so you and your crew can have it //
not that good... 4/10
I'm sorry I have to diss ya //
But I aint ridin with ya //
wtf... wack... 0/10
MC Aines come on dawg, you'll kill reign for sure //
reign you've sucked too many dicks that why you have a saw jaw //
not bad... not good either... 5/10
Your bladder is full of sperm to the top //
you another pussy wanting to live hip-hop //
weak punch.... 4/10
Back away faggit, I hear michael jackson has a spare room //
He's fed up of using his vacume //
that could of been a dope bar... even a winner... but no, spoiled it as the second line is too short... 5/10
Maybe you can teach him some tricks //
on sucking little dicks, giving little boys hicks //
lol, good... dont make up for the previous lines blunder, but yea... nice... 6/10
His house will then be called the HOUSE OF PRICKS //
I'll take your sorry girlfriend suck her tits //
SHOW HER HOW A REAL MAN SUCKS GIRLS CLITS //
not bad... but once again... not good... 5/10
overall... 37/90
weak verse... structure was very poor... some nice concepts... but spoiled by a short line, which could of been a battle winner tbh...
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