Ayt dawgs last time i got dqed cause mcainus reported me!!

So im just guna have 2 beat u rapper_bigga!!

i was winning 4-1 last time so its guna be a K.O this time!!

Rules:
10-20 lines
no x.l.g votes
no textbook votes
no hate votes
no d/r votes
i spit first
spit 15 mins after me!!

gud luck ayt lets go!!

Dis faggott bitch steaming shit cant ruin my flow//
let me introduce dis pussy, hes a part time ho//
tellin everyone how u a lunatic, and feeling sick//
well dats da side effect of u suckin too much dick//
stop boastin bout ur cash pussy, actin all rich//
dat moneys comin threw coz u get fucked like a bitch//
u transexual low-life wich, u feelin the tension//
u look like a fuckin penis wid a constant erection//
u will neva have the skills to compete lyrically//
if i ever see u, im fuckin u up chump, physically//
and im not talkin bout how men serve u in bed//
im talkin bout a piece of metal, goin threw yo head//
i gotta bullit bitch, dats gona fuckin strike u dead//
i jus throw up da middle finger as a hint of a sign//
da same middle finger dat went threw yo mommas line//

yo, let me explain sum of my lyrics.
(reffering to da first battle we had)

“u look like a fuckin penis wid a constant erection” – basically wot im tryin to say is dat he has a very long head dat looks like a dick.

try beating that bitch!!

I'M SORRY I'M LATE WITH MY LYRICS, I HAD A FEW PROBLEMS WITH MY COMPUTER.

here we go, the second battle,
THE RE-MATCH


Here we go again fuckin right //
I'm battling this bitch who we all know is shite //
Textbooks, another title of the new gay sex books //
Claiming your the best, join are crew //
Your the queer in the mirror wishing your dick grew //
little maggit, pouncin around like a faggit //
vaciline tubes so you and your crew can have it //
I'm sorry I have to diss ya //
But I aint ridin with ya //
MC Aines come on dawg, you'll kill reign for sure //
reign you've sucked too many dicks that why you have a saw jaw //
Your bladder is full of sperm to the top //
you another pussy wanting to live hip-hop //
Back away faggit, I hear michael jackson has a spare room //
He's fed up of using his vacume //
Maybe you can teach him some tricks //
on sucking little dicks, giving little boys hicks //
His house will then be called the HOUSE OF PRICKS //
I'll take your sorry girlfriend suck her tits //
SHOW HER HOW A REAL MAN SUCKS GIRLS CLITS //

COME ON PEOPLE, GET SOME VOTES IN.

DO ME A FAVOUR AND I'LL PAY YOU BACK.

REIGN, I'm after you dawg

well dun bigga u merked this niggas ass reign man u aint shit go home suck more dick BITCH.................................

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heres my breakdown......

flow-not availible in text
structure-tie
vocab-reign
mulits-tie
metas-tie
wordplay-tie
punches-reign
personals-tie

overall-reign

props to the both of ya, but ima say reign takes this......

yo can u please return the favor and hit this up wit an honest vote?

I know your vote didn't count because you can't poll yet, but if you did vote, it would have been disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
-Cprogress

much appreciated.......

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mcainus cant vote!!!

0-0 so far get some more votes up in here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

reign, you say ' place to fill (good mc wanted) '

TEXTBOOKS aint shit, I hope '' mc aines '' crew take ya down. I'm only hatin' ya dawg cause the way you fooled me. I beat you last time even though you got DQ'd It still counts as a win, So my name should of been on that list.

But I don't need no TEXTBOOKS. Everyday I'm learning in his rap battle shit.

an the*reign*man...............I'M AFTER YOU BITCH

ite lets see...

Reign Man

i really couldnt fnd any quotables in ya verse, idont know if RB's whole style is violence punches, but they aint creative or witty, and there for aint good or direct punches, lik saying ima do this and that to you...
you lacked originality with ya verse, rhyme scheme is too simple, tried personals but didnt flip them that well...
you need a lot of elevation...



Rapper Bigga[/b

again nothing great in ya verse, but your punches were a lot more wittier, came with a lot of good idea's, lacked an edge to make it a bit more direct, but they were wittier punhes...
kinda lacked a solid structure, but you did have a better rhyme scheme with multi's even though it wasnt consistant...
personals was your ownly downfall, as you didnt really use that many to your advantage...


quite a close battle, both need elevation in seperte area's...

but this is how i see the battle...

Punches- Reign had really un direct and lame punches, not feeling his use of idea's, while Bigga had the wittier punches, so id give him the edge for this category... [b]Rapper Bigga

Personals- This was a dead heat, cos you both lacked personals, tried some, but nothing really pulled off well... Tie

Wordplay- Didnt catch any wordplay in any of the verses, some simple idea's, maybe some hints to double meanings, but nothing effective from either Tie

Flow/Multi's- Close call, Reign man had the steadier flow, but rapper bigga had a better rhyme scheme, and used some multi's, but id have to call this a tie again Tie

Creativity- gotta give this one to Rapper Bigga, he had some creative and orignal idea's in his verse, reign man just had really weak violence lines, there over played, and just not effective in battles of wits and creativity in emcee's skills... Rapper Bigga


so based on that Analysis, id have to go with Rapper Bigga


props to both emcee's, i hope you can pick up on the area's your lacking in ya battles, keep elevating...

and mine and Buzzkill's battle is really getting slept on, so if either of you two could drop an honest vote wed both appreciate it...

YO DON'T FORGET TO VOTE ON THE POLL AFTER YOU POST.

OK........remember vote on the POLL

we need votes so someone can win come on people........VOTE ON THE POLL aswell as POST

aight here's the break down.......Reign you had an o.k verse, simple and you stayed on one topic too much in your punches, the whole sex thing "you look like a bitch", "you suck dick"...<-that's played and it's repetitive so it gets boring....

Rappa Bigga your verse wasn't all that neither your structure and flow was off and you didn't have punches really in your verse....alot of it was just filler, i mean you were talkin about what he's doing and trying to do, but you didn't punch him you had punches that were even more played than his...the sperm line and the micheal jackson line...then you came with some sex shit again with "i'll fuck ya girl"..."i'll eat ya girl"<-that's bein a real man?....o.k!....and your opener was really really weak, you started off aight but then you said "SHITE!"...c'mon really!....

Overall i'm gonna give this to Reign, both of you had played punches, but he didn't have filler in his verse that hindered him like Rappa Bigga.....

Return the Fav on my battle with LyricallyInsane1.....thank you..

sorry i can't poll yet...

---ThA BrEaKdOwN---

Opener-none...didnt feel either openers
Closer-Reign...that had me crackin up...bigga that closer was weak
Multis-Reign...both had multis but Reigns hit way harder
Punches-Reign...bigga u had sum punches but reigns hit harder
Sustainment-Reign...he kept up he whole way through
Overall- Reign

I KNOW I CANT POLL BUT AT THESE WILL UP IT FOR YOU......................please vote on this battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102702

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pictureperfect2 vs me..please vote

i dont know why but it wont let me vote on the poll...

look this is what it says...


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Download Internet Explorer from Microsoft and stop using the AOL browser. It's a piece of junk
-Cprogress

iono...........but yo, the battle i asked u to return the favor on before was closed, so can yall vote or drop ur feedback or somethin on this............

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102686

much appreciated.........

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