Freeman - The whole verse was week, and most punches had hardly any effect. You tried to be creative, but it didnt really flash. The structure was aight, a couple stretched lines. Need to work on a new rhyme scheme, that one is getting old. But there is one thing I liked about your verse. I thought the closer was pretty good. I dont think you put full potential in this...

J Goodz - Verse was week, and it was pretty wack as well. The punches wernt hard hitting. You need to fix that structure up hommie. You did have a better rhyme scheme than him, I liked that part. But it was to week, and work on your creativity. Keep elevating....

Vote - Freeman

Conclusion - Both verses were just weak, but he had the better of the two. He had a nice closer on that. So he gets my vote. Dont take anything I say personal, just elevate, thats what were all here for... aight hommies...

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