Lol at this ..

.. it was funny to read, that's about it. The boxed in structure is gay, shows to me you care more about how it looks than the content in it. I'd ditch writing like that. Also, a lot of the rhyming was madd basic, sometimes like .. only two syllables. = / where is the skill in writing anything like that?


I didnt like it.

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