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IP:
This was ok..
Cata: You had the better punches i thought, you just came harder with them, you had some good personals....your structure was ok, shorten the lines up though...you had the better flow i thought as well.
Jedi: you had alright punches, not as hard as Cata though...your flow was alright, could be worked on....but you did have the better structure....you had alright personals.
But overall Cata took this with the better verse i think...props to both.
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