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get back at me

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What the fuck is in this niggaz avatar
self portratit homorphadike superstar
This nigga leading a double life/ a chick with a dick
your whole fucking style makes me sick
This battle well end quicker then a Tyson fight
Lyrical Jedi bomb your whole shit then take flight
They say your shit is so small you need tweezers to masterbate it
so that like your style you need to castrate it
cata storophix got more writer block then Nestorvic
Comparing our style is like compering Brad Banks and Mike Vick

Explantion for the slow niggaz
Brad Banks third quarterback Mike Vick the best
Nestorvic NBA's leader in block shots
homorphdike born with both major sex origns

Peace Out R/B head until the next battle

Pop a shot at this JEDI & leave this bitch alive but with a dead eye--like lisa Left eye
and let the lead fly...ta ring ya head twice...drain ya main vein till ur fuckin bled dry

i'm the illest when it come to the one lines and multi's- like i'm a verbal genious
kid thinks he can spit of the top of the dome..just..cuz he jacked a gerbals penis

sick shit i spit to currdle ya splean quick. vivid pictures so vivid that even my words'll seem sick
u beatn me...Shit... i got a better chance of frank white just givin me a triple beam-N-brick

what ever u use ta think is producin a scheme..just u thinkN....... ya cool..................... is reducin ya steam
u coundnt ever beat me.. if you were choosin ya team ....Shit mother Fucker ....ud even lose in ya dreams

i see no Reas. after this u shouldn'r be 0-n-3...expeacially after all shit u been showin me..without even knowin me
u can't even flow with me this bitchs flows are so fucked up he'd have a better carreer in poetry. kid waits for votes Clinchen his rosery!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Opener: Cata
Punches: Cata
Personals: Tie
Flow: Cata
Structure: LJ (cata shorten it up nigga)
Vocab: neither
Closer: neither both sucked

cata...Ur structure was wack..lines to long and LJ too short...Cata takes this battle jus cuz the other kid made no since well v/ cata ~1

Decent Opener.

I Hate These Stupid Homo/Trans/Bi Punches. Overused.

Decent Punch

Good Punch. Rhyme Was Dissapointing.

Good Closer. I Big In Football So I Understand This Punch.

Decent Verse. It Was More On The Whack Side But Keep Elevatin.



Okay. Good Opener. Okay Follow up.

LMAO. Hilarious.

Nice. Continue The Entertainment.

Good Punch.

Good Closer. Hit Harder than Jedi.

Decent Verse. Your Structure is Wierd but You Hit Harder And Get My Vote.

Vote: Cata

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cata stophic........ took it



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both of u return the voting favor on my battle verse MC aines......
vote fair....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...474#post1037474

^^^thats teh link.hit it up ASAP

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Scared of your shadow?…trust me that’s always been Following-u....



TEST me.....you'll soon be ~Sonned~

Aiight slim thug I guess no one on site like different shit just the same ol' trigga poppin bullshit and better record voting this is exactly why niggaz like KRS-ONE and Rakim never made it platinum but niggaz like Nelly and Chingy reaches it ten times niggaz follow with niggaz that have simple lines to understand. This is why niggaz like the ying yang twins and niggaz get famous.

White Lighting nice breakdown man I appreciate it good explanation. I mean opionons are like assholes everybody has one and you explained your shit these others niggaz is trying to say my shit is horrible I know my shit is not horrible.

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Gotta agree wit whitelighting. his opinion is tha same as mine yo. Lyrical and Cata are sum great mc's. Keep doin y'all shit. Holla.

Opener: Cata
Punches: Cata
Personals: Tie
Flow: Cata
Structure: Jedi
Vocab: tie
Closer: tie
Jedis lines too simple and short

Vote: Cata

vote on this-
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101455

This was ok..

Cata: You had the better punches i thought, you just came harder with them, you had some good personals....your structure was ok, shorten the lines up though...you had the better flow i thought as well.

Jedi: you had alright punches, not as hard as Cata though...your flow was alright, could be worked on....but you did have the better structure....you had alright personals.

But overall Cata took this with the better verse i think...props to both.