First work on your rhyme scheme and a better structure. Cause they didnt fit each other in this case. That was the ONLY big problem. Otherwise, just work on creativity and wit. Cause you got to have people wanting the next punch. not like," Damn, why did I say I would return the favor. " Those would probably be best to work on. Go to the crew forum and I will talk to you about somthing from there... Aight hommie, you can only go up.

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