Erm, MT Was Ok, Structure Needed Work And Flow Was Off (Long Lines)...Ya Had Sum Concepts There But Didnt Really Pull Off The Punch, And What Punches You Did Have, Were Played Anyways...But Not Bad For A Newbie..

Dick, An Ok Verse, Punches Were There And Were More Original Than MT's...Better Structure And Flow Was Good but I Think Ya Verse Lacked Complexity, But I Know Ya Got It Coz I Seen Better.

Vote - Dick

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